I can not stress this enough! But I'll try!

Please for the love of all that good and pure in the world: MAKE another story about Yugi and Yami!

This is crazy bonkers awesome! I absolutely LOVED it!

I wish Yami would have hugged Yugi when he got him back.

Hell, I was even expecting some type of brotherly embrace. But NOPE! That not what we got at all! Which disappointed me immensely.

More fanfics about these two! More Brotherly/friendship hugs! :3 Please!

Like how you wrote the interaction in this

I did actually like this quite a lot. At the beginning I cringed at their theatrical actions but the story became gradually easier and more pleasant to read. The only thing I missed more was Yugi's pov, but this was Yami's pov as you stated. All in all, it'll probably take a while for me to read this again but that doesn't mean it wasn't entertaining. (The puzzleshipping was so visible, thank you.) 8/10.

you should continue this

Oh Ra, this was AMAZING. I've never seen such depth in a one-shot before. It made me cry. Please, pretty please do another one.

I really love this story. It's ... it's ... I do not know what to say. I cried because it was so good! You can feel the Pharaon's guilt towards Yugi and his pain of having betrayed him..

It was beautiful!

(Sorry for the mistakes, I do not speak english )

Very good job!