| Reviews for Harry Potter and bravery and - oh Harry - be careful! |
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   old-crow chapter 8 . 5/22 Hi, Your mirror idea was an inspired bit of storytelling. cheers Old-Crow |
| SerpentGlass chapter 3 . 5/7 Woah, a cool Moldyshorts? Wow. |
| Jimbocous chapter 8 . 4/19 Thanks |
| Marc the Unruly chapter 8 . 4/13 Wonderful! Thanks for sharing. :) |
| Tilty.bbb chapter 8 . 2/1 This was a fantastic read well done |
| gbttown1 chapter 8 . 1/27 Great story! |
| mumphie chapter 8 . 11/6/2019 An interesting take. I think it could be fleshed out for a few more chapters starting with Ron and Percy fighting off Peter, Sirius getting Harry and the kids not growing up so fast. |
| mumphie chapter 7 . 11/6/2019 Ummm...emotionally they are eleven and ten. Taking away even more of their childhood isn't a good thing. |
| mumphie chapter 5 . 11/6/2019 Huh...I'm not a Snape-ite as such, but as noble as Snape was, why couldn't he have just used his magic to get Dumbles to let go, and banish the DLs into the abyss? He could have redeemed himself further by being there for the kids. Well, I hope they get a sane Sirius back. |
| Realmsmith chapter 1 . 7/28/2019 love the story, hate the title. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/18/2019 Oké good potential story although it could go on some more chapters. But was it really needed to let them grow up from 11 to 18 years? with suddenly all the knowlegde and start teaching wtf! childhood already gone oh let them miss there teenage years too and missing that growing up part? Alsmost to there age where they had a child, no instead granger parents come first so confusing this. |
| aratakasugatrinity7 chapter 7 . 2/13/2019 The 'growth spurts' were so totally random. Why does every author seem to have a fascination with Harry being over 6'? In book 5 or 6 it was stated that Harry was within an inch or so of James so he was exactly the height he should have been... Oh well, ignoring that, it has been a fantastic journey. Thank you for sharing. |
| aratakasugatrinity7 chapter 2 . 2/13/2019 I am confused. If severus wanted out from Dumbledores thumb and he regretted his actions, why did he not just let Dumbledore consume the poison and be done with him while protecting Hermione as well? |
| Kai chapter 8 . 1/14/2019 You write "the twins" and obviously think, and expect the readers to think, of red-haired people. Well, it doesn't work that way, because I'm a guy. That means that exotic dark-haired twins with boobs are a lot better in my opinion. And a lot lovelier than some ugly red-haired weasels. Sorry, but Weasels no - Patils yes! :-) |
| noylj chapter 7 . 10/31/2018 A little too mushy. My diabetes is acting up. |
