I hope u get a chance to update this story soon it's pretty good so far. My opinion is that any pov that helps develop the story is a good pov.

I want to see jades pov because it's just starting to get to me that I don't know what going on in her head

You should definitely make chapters on Jade's POV too. Please update soon. I really like your story. ;) 3

What the fuck Tori, you can't just see her crying and leave her there like you don't give a fuck ;-;... that's it, no more tacos or burritos for ya.

I don't know you, but I really hope things get better, and please please don't be depressed :( (I know it doesn't work like that, but I had to try?) Yeah, I know I'm just a reader/follower or whatever, but I do care :(

Imagine a T-rex trying to take off his hat but he can't since he has a very big head and very short arms (?... no?... anything?... okay :(

Uhm... well... hi :l, sorry for my awkwardness... and my bad english ... so... yeah

Keep writing!

Harsh, but in every relationship there are some ups and downs. jade's hurt, not the thing you'd want to deal with. Tori's hurt too, an not being very nice. i can see how she felt she was being led on, but I don't remember Jade ever saying anything to lead her on, just being nice to her. We'll see what you're new ideas lead to in the next few chapters.

Love the story and how jade likes tori but not anybody else keep it up

I like the 1st 2 chapters. I hope you update this soon.

Cool

no one knows tori is gay. i made it where jade just took a shot in thinking that. but so far know one know tori is gay

Enjoy your vacation.

Why is it some people don't wear bra's? Not my problem. Tori and jade are now aware of two problems that can, potentially, be resolved buy the end of this story. Tori's relationship with her mother, a situation that may never resolve, but worth the look, and why Jade is instantly different with Tori than anyone else. Please don't make it she somehow mystically knew tori was gay. More likely she overheard Trina mention it at some point, and when she saw Tori, was attracted to someone she knew she could win. Or maybe it's something else. maybe Tori reminds her of her favorite pet. Whatever.

I think Tori will find out the answers to her questions soon and in typical Jade fashion, ya know bluntness.

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Great first chapter

I like it o.o it is very interesting, I can't wait for the next chapter :3

It has potential. Jade's smitten, or at least interested, and that alone is going to make Tori's world very complicated. Lets see what you have in store for Tori's second day?

Maybe Tori is special to Jade for a specific reason but now it's just a matter of time to find out exactly the reason.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.