Liking it.

Good start for a fic.

I can't wait to see what happens next.

Hey. UPDATE PLEASE! This is so good!

wow that was intense chapter lookin forward to more
Later Daze

Wow. Such suspense. Update soon. No. Update NOW.
Jk, take your time. But not too much time.
Shutting up now.

Not a huge X-Men fan, but working on being more open to them, but I read it as suggested to me by Appel Bougher, and she was right you have a nice writing style. I have plenty of questions now, and can't wait to get some answers :)

Haha! Be my slave! I love the title! It was way better than any of the ones I suggested. Awesome! This is wicked, and I can't wait for more! It's official! I'm hooked. Very well written as well, and it's a cliffhanger, which rules like you wouldn't believe. This SO going to be popular... Following... Favoriting...

That's really good!It makes your imagination go wild about what will happen next. It also makes you curious to know what will happen next. I don't think its short. If it was longer it wouldn't be so mysterious. Excellent job! :)