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mulderchick35 chapter 1 . 12/14/2018 Wow. This story is REALLY well done. The language and cadence were beautiful. I'm not a fan of BLT myself, but I think think is a beautiful example of how the three characters could interrelate and balance each other. Excellent character examination and story telling in short story format! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/23/2018 Why would human Lauren want to date two Fae because when she dies it will be the two of them left with Dyson probably inserting himself too. Dumb. Just dumb. |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2017 Laughing at the reviewer that said this could work on the show. How could this work on the show? Tamsin treated Lauren like shit and cowardly Bo was too blind or didn't give af to stop it. Lauren deserved better than anyone on that show. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2017 Garbage it belittles Lauren's human life. There's no way she would be in such a relationship. We all saw her roll her eyes when Bo mentioned a threesome. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/24/2017 The way Lauren struggled with Bo feeding off others and not wanting to know the details it's a slap in the face to her character to try and make her belittle her human life with a threesome. |
YurTeddyBear chapter 1 . 8/31/2014 Ppllleeaasseee make this a full fic! I love it |
rampantdragon chapter 1 . 8/25/2014 Have read this several times and cant believe the excellent quality of the writing. :) |
rampant dragon chapter 1 . 7/29/2014 An exceptional piece of writing...very evocative... Had to read and re-read it... |
Kei chapter 1 . 7/19/2014 Wow ! Beautiful story! Please continue it. |
Rampant Dragon chapter 1 . 7/15/2014 Have read and re-read this and its amazing. Great piece. |
nerdrific79 chapter 1 . 7/12/2014 What a unique story of BLT! I love how poetic you wrote of them all coming together and in their own time. Simply brilliant! |
Spyklv chapter 1 . 7/12/2014 Well, it wasn't the copdoc I love so very much, but it was damn fine all the same! I usually struggle to see the chemistry between Bo and Tamsin, but I like the way you showed them here. They weren't behaving selfishly and Bo wasn't mitigating the importance of Lauren in her life and heart. I especially liked that she offered to stop seeing her if Lauren wanted. It gave Lauren importance in the hierarchy of her heart, if that makes any sense. Love that they went from tolerating each other, barely, to falling into a routine, to falling in love. I think the part about Bo not feeling completely fulfilled by either woman, but pretty close with both went a long way to selling me on this too. I can see that. It's similar to what they are trying to tell us on the show, albeit less eloquently as you. The whole Dyson fills one need while Lauren another is sloppy in the show and I can't buy it beyond season 2. In this story, it makes totally sense. BLT as the ultimate is the only result that really does work if you ask me. Everyone having a stake in the relationship with one another brings an equity that can't be denied. The idea that this is the one and only lifetime they will all have together was an illuminating bit that I've not thought of before as well. Love it! I still wait with baited breath for the next sequel goody that blow into that brilliant brain of yours. Until then, feel free to explore and share all the BLT, Doccubus and Copdoc goodness one muse can inspire;). Thanks! |
Magineli chapter 1 . 7/12/2014 Well that was different...a BLT sandwich, interesting if not a wee bit pervey, and sexy! But several ships satisfied in one chapter... But I bit of a misnomer, beginnings, but only one chapter...false advertising lady;( lol M;) |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2014 Nay! |
GvMeOneResn chapter 1 . 7/12/2014 Last review was me! Didn't realize I was signed out. Loved the story :) |