Finally got to the end of this story and I loved it.
Good work my dude ;)

I still say that it would be interesting to see Louise participate in the Tartaros Arc and the arcs after the 1 year time skip. Who knows, someone else might do a sequel to this story. After all I did find one story that is an alternate take on your Assassins of Fairy Tail.

I had a blast reading this awesome story. Good plot, suspence, and a little bi of romance sprinkled in. Absolutely awesome fic.

This was certainly one of the best stories I've ever read. You've got some skill with story writing.

this story have its own charm a stong one

This story is GREAT! It definitly needs a sequel or at have Louise show up in Assassins of Fairy Tail.

an impressive story.

quite the change from the Foz formula by having loiuse be the one teleported elsewhere. not to mention being her own familiar.

characters were great, conflict was great, everything was great.

signed,

kingpariah

This was a brilliant story. I really loved how you developed the plot and Louise's character. My favorite bits of the story were Louise's interactions with Kirche and Eleanor as they never happened in the anime.

HOLY SHIT I AM LITERALLY IN TEARS LOUISE GREW AS A CHARACTER AND THE GOAL THAT MOTIVATED HER THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE STORY CHANGED AT THE END AND _EVERYONE GETS A HAPPY ENDING_ AND ITS _G A Y_ I AM SO HAPPY

Blake Belladonna XD

Strangely enough, this story is better than the anime itself. I'm not saying Familiar of Zero is bad but there's a weird charm in this fic that the anime can't make

A lovely story, though it felt like a bit of Deus ex machina at some points towards the end, but still a good story.

Also, is it strange I imagined this last chapter with "Dearly Beloved" from kingdom hearts in the background?

Good story just read the first chapter it sounds realistic but whats sad for the characters it sounds realistic it is awesome though

Good job on your story.

I loved this story, really :)