I'm re-reading your story (which is really nice, BTW) and I just happened to see some people saying that there's no Filipino language. There is. You can check the 1987 Constitution for that.

I never imagined what arthurs family would be like. I always assumed he was an orphan or runaway child...

So cute!

I'm loving your story but I'm half Filipino and the language is Tagalog not "Filipino". Sorry just had to bust that out lol. I love this story!

So I translated it in google translate and I've been squealing for the past five minutes. And now my sister is fearing for my mental health. Oh I so wish that she understood Filipino. *sigh*

Blake is the surname of the character Joseph plays in The Dark Knight Rises

Just an interesting little tidbit. There is no Filipino language; there are dialects that are all slightly different. My source for this is my dad, who spent two years there, and my paternal grandparents, who were both born there, if memory serves.

Hey,

Wow ! Your fiction is freaking awesome !
You got everything for you here. I wonder how you actually manage to elaborate so complexe people, it's a real gift you have her. ;)
I'm still overwhelmed with the end of the story... or the beginning :D
Actually I don't know if "overwhelmed" is a word, nor if my sentences are correct, cause I'm french. . So yeah I had fun with all the french sentences in your story, although I understood english better. x) It's fine by me, I made me laugh.
However, if you want to I can correct them. Did you do it yourself ? The main mistake is that you're misunderstanding the translation of "you". If you talk to a few people it's "vous", if you're talking with one you're familiar with you say "tu".
Whatever, it doesn't really matter. ;)

You're fiction is awesome ! Just... thank you.
You should totally keep on, while I'm going to check your other fictions

Kiss,
Cass'

I do believe today is your birthday...so Happy Birthday! I do hope you have a wonderful day.

I can't imagine Eames as mean...he's way too awesome for that! That is really sad. I'm glad you did because it gave more of a balance to them. I am sad that this is the last chapter...I definitely wanted and didn't want this to come. It is definitely see you soon because I did see those two stories you updated and I will be reading them (I had a ton of stories I'm reading updated and I wasn't able to have much time to read them so I'm still playing catch up).

I absolutely love how this was from Arthur's POV. And not only that but it went through the entire story from his thoughts. I loved reading the different points and why he did what he did and how enamoured he was with Ariadne right away. I loved reading how it was through the time with his feelings and what she really does mean to him. I also loved how his thoughts on some of the others, like Eames, are in there. And I loved how he went through the years together with Ariadne before moving forward.

I loved how he found Coulson and then had him taken care of. The dog sounds cute. I'm glad that they're all going to be there with them. I will say the way he did the proposal was really wonderful. I loved that everyone was there for it. And the dog with the ring when Arthur picked up Coulson. His speech was absolutely beautiful and I loved it! I really loved how things ended up for them.

This has been a truly wonderful story to read. I loved how the twenty steps led to them being engaged. I really loved how you had something for them to get to know each other each chapter and how they just got closer with each other. This is definitely one of my favorite stories! Thank you so much for writing this. I think you did such a marvelous job for this. I can't wait to read your other stories.

I will not cry. I will not cry!
Oh god... I... Just... Argh! Words. Too. Hard.
Okay, I'm going to have to respond to your response (haha) first in an attempt to regain my emotions and ability for coherent thought...
First of all, rant as much as you need, my dear, sometimes just putting it out into the void helps a lot. People can be arrogant, rude twats. I swear that university is an amazing time though, once that first year is over and people have settled in, you get to meet all these like-minded people and you can cut those ties with all the people who are weighing you down - it is one of the best feelings haha.
I think you made the right choice in letting Ariadne be vulnerable - she is human after all :) some people just never grow up :(
I'm going to go over to your profile and have a look at your new stories straight away! I am very excited _ and I promise I will keep reviewing! Your responses always make me smile and feel so happy.
So if I am correct in my estimations - it is your birthday on the 1st or 2nd of Jan? That's so exiting!
Okay, so on to this chapter... Wow. Okay, let me begin by saying that I could not have imagined a better final chapter for this story. Everything was just so poignantly beautiful - that Arthur really knows how to tug on a girl's heart strings! I though the proposal was absolutely perfect - it was a wonderful combination of their personalities. I absolutely loved the way that you took us on a journey back through the story from Arthur's perspective - it had me all emotional from the start. He is just so adorable when he is in love. And the addition of Coulson to their little family was so lovely.
I love that the proposal was a family affair - both blood family and their chosen families. It made it extra special! I am sure that they have a wonderful life ahead of them!
Well, my friend, this is it... My last review for this wonderful story. It has been an absolute pleasure to read this and share the journey (ooh, watch out, I'm getting all sappy now). You shall be hearing from me soon though :)
An ending is never sad, if there is a new beginning in sight. Á bientôt!

Sorry for my late review! :( This is such a nice ending! :)

Ohmygods! This was absolutely perfect!

If anything, this was probably one of the most well-written stuff I've read in so long. Wow!

I really love how you wrote the first part of this chapter in like a flashback thing, that was a really good way to start the end of this fic (lol get it? The start to the end? Hahaha huhu nvm) It was a trip down memory lane for your readers as much as it was for Arthur. Cuuutee!

And the gifts he got for her! Man, I want a guy like Arthur!

THE PROPOSAL SCENE WAS SOMETHING ELSE, TOO! THAT ENTIRE SPEECH! GAHHH MY HEART MELTED AND MY FEELINGS EXPLODED HUHU and the way he asked her to marry him! I can't I cannot I can't! The wordplay was beautiful and I am just gonna cry in a corner for a moment

Congrats again on finishing this fic! It was a wonderful read and I hope more people read it too! So proud of you!

I am so happy and sad at the same time. This is (of course) my favorite chapter of all. I love Coulson so much, he is adorable and how Arthur found him was cute. I am just hopeless romantic and this is the most beautiful proposal ever. Arthur's speech about Ariadne was so sweet and you can feel his love to her in it. The saddest thing is that it is really over, that day finally come but I was so honored to read this story. It will be always in my memory. I am really looking forward for your another stories and one more thing, my Christmas is because of you a little happier now.

You did it. Omfg you actually did it... You killed me with all that fluff in this chapter... When I saw that notification my heart almost popped out of my chest! And that proposal... Holy shit that proposal was out if this world. I was fangirling and squealing during the whole chapter, I think I have to watch a horror movie to balance my feelings or else I'm gonna die because of extreme cuteness or something... This chapter was so great that I'm not gonna ask anything from Santa this year lol :P I think you couldn't find a better way to end this flawless story... And, btw, I got so excited that I was your 100th reviewer! I'm free when it comes to fangirling over my favorite characters, so we totally should! Oh! And chapter 4 is one of my favorite chapters, too... Thank you for 20 incredible chapters, I feel so lucky that I found out about this story! You are an amazing writer and an even more amazing person! I'm so gonna read more of your stories, so you're gonna read my long reviews again lol ;) Every minute of waiting for a new update was worth it and I feel proud for being a fan of this story... I tried, with my reviews, to make you understand how wonderful your chapters were and to make you feel the pleasure I felt with your updates. :) See you again in another story! But, until then, MERRY CHRISTMAS! xoxo

Lots of love,
Kelly :D

Super super cute chap...Loved it.