The story itself would be really good if it wasn’t so rushed, like Harry Annoncen he goes dark harry becomes friends with all slitheryin and forgives Severus. Then he the Malfoy’s just accept him the second they learn he is dark and Tom and Harry go from an innocent kiss to having sec in no toile. The story would have been really good if u took ur time and let everything happen slowly and not so rushed like Dumbledores plan was no offence shit. And the fact Harry Annoncen he was dark to everyone and Dumbledore didn’t act faster or his resort that everything worked without THE headmasters permission is rather unrealistic. BTW sorry for spelling mistakes I’m dislexia as fk

Okay,no offence,but Dumbledore’s attempt at manipulation is shit

Please update or adopt out this story

Omg. Please please come back and update this awesome story soon

you need to paragraph your chapters, less short and more longer. your paragraph are to big and long.
short them up, makes reading it a lot better, but your story is very good

MORE!

more?

This was awesome. Will Harry all for Luna and neville to be pulled from the school as well. Or will he ask them to spy for him.

Perhaps you could update this story?

Please continue the story! Can't wait to read more soongreat story!

Hope to read more soon.

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Story? Good. Storylines? You seriously need a good experienced beta reader.

Eeeehhhhhhh

THIS is short?

I hope you start updating this fic soon