| Reviews for Crazy |
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   cloudsongs chapter 2 . 1/5 The writing style is good but elements of the story could still use some work. It seems OOC for Chloe to go into a group home and immediately find Derek with his BO and acne attractive. It also seems unbelievable that Liz would introduce everyone at the home by their diagnosis. I also don't understand why Chloe would protect Royce -she has no reason to considering he just tried to sexually assault her. Story has a lot of potential |
| jabc4 chapter 18 . 6/1/2016 AWWW! Loved the ending. Very Well Done. |
| Cold Blood Girl chapter 18 . 5/5/2016 Chloe should tell her dad what a bitch lauren is and to make Bae her guardian |
| ShadowSmite chapter 18 . 1/21/2016 Oh my god that was an amazing ending! I loved this chapter so very much and I'm sad to see it end. At the same time I'm glad to see how everything turned out. So... Thinking of doing an epilogue? |
| VioletScriptor chapter 18 . 1/20/2016 Aaaawww, thats so sweet. I love the way you write, I really do. I think you have great potential for becomming a writer at some point. I would love to red your books. Crazy was sweet and a liiiitle weird, but hey, all the best stories are. ;) Sincerly, ThatIndieGirl |
| jabc4 chapter 17 . 12/22/2015 Please excuse me while I try to catch my breath from laughing so hard at that last line. |
| ShadowSmite chapter 17 . 11/19/2015 This was probably my favorite chapter yet! The description of the hallucination was flawless, and the whole thing was written very clearly and easy to understand. I will admit, I didn't understand the last sentence. Can you please elaborate or tell me what you meant exactly? I loved this chapter and the direction you are taking this is very interesting and opens lots of opportunities for bonding between the two. I can't wait to see how you are going to finish this! |
| Anna Mara chapter 16 . 7/16/2015 awwweee |
| ShadowSmite chapter 16 . 7/5/2015 I love this story so much and I can't wait for chapter 17! |
| jabc4 chapter 16 . 7/4/2015 Awww. That ended cutely... But, uh. nip in the butt? Don't you mean Nip in the Bud? |
| TastyKitsuneBrains chapter 16 . 7/4/2015 Hmm... I kind of wish it was a little longer, but other than that, I really like this chapter. Lovely Chlerek moment! w |
| Onemilllives chapter 15 . 6/12/2015 Shit is right! That was a supper sweet chapter! I'm so glad things with Chloe and Derek are starting off right! Please keep updating! |
| Onemilllives chapter 12 . 6/12/2015 I'm so glad Rae and Chloe seem to be okay! Rae seems much happier too. |
| ShadowSmite chapter 15 . 6/7/2015 Aw man really a cliff hanger? Please write the next chapter I'm really loving this fanfic and I think you are an amazing writer. |
| jabc4 chapter 15 . 5/27/2015 Ooooh. Somebody's in trouble after their BEAUTIFUL kiss... |
