| Reviews for In the Clutches of the Hawk |
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   DarkJosey66 chapter 6 . 1/27/2015 Oo a Hawkgirl and Batman pairing there really should be more these anyway i hope you update soon and keep up the great work P.S. i cant wait to see what Bruce does when he's finally out of his cell and shows why no one should ever underestimate hum |
| Silvereye-BW chapter 6 . 1/12/2015 Awesome! |
| Jedi Knight Ryan chapter 6 . 1/11/2015 very good chapter! love the level of trust between Bruce and Hawkgirl |
| Accountkiller000 chapter 6 . 1/4/2015 ¡Fabulous! You have progressed well in history, each chapter is looking forward. I love this couple, and how you develop the story. Continuing well. Have a good year, full of happiness and things that you need to be better! Take Care |
| Mireilles3 chapter 5 . 10/19/2014 Oh oh, an alliance is forming :) go shae! Great work once again, dear! More soon, please! |
| KatyLynne chapter 2 . 10/18/2014 I'm sorry, I couldn't read much of this. I hate to leave even the slightest of negative reviews. You have a lot of flair in your writing, but it's too much. Way too much. Not every sentence has to be an elaborate metaphor and not every object needs to be described. Variety in sentence length and structure will make your writing more interesting. The plot itself was intriguing, but the amount of description was over the top. Keep writing and I'm sure you'll improve. |
| Jedi Knight Ryan chapter 5 . 10/14/2014 It's about time batman came back! I cannot wait for what's next! |
| CMU chapter 5 . 10/14/2014 and I'm still following.. looking forward to the next chapters |
| time2read chapter 5 . 10/14/2014 Wow amazing stuff! Love batman! Awesome ! Awesome! AWESOME! no words to describe update soon! |
| Rose chapter 5 . 10/14/2014 OMG! This is so interesting here! Can't wait for the next part! Update soon please! |
| Silvereye-BW chapter 5 . 10/14/2014 Awesome. Bruce told Shayera his real name and some stuff about his life. |
| Accountkiller000 chapter 5 . 10/13/2014 Do not worry about the delay, I would wait months just to read some of the fic. Now if I'm excited, I like how will the relationship of the two. Forgive my bad English. |
| Mireilles3 chapter 4 . 9/25/2014 Trust your instinct, Shay :) Bruce needs your help :) Your take on Shay's world and life is really interesting, but I can't help but wonder how Bruce is faring... Please, post more soon :) |
| Kazuma Bushi chapter 2 . 9/19/2014 Shayera is to be betrothed? Wasn't she in a relationship with one of the generals in the JLU cartoon? |
| Kazuma Bushi chapter 1 . 9/19/2014 Your writing is really descriptive. I felt like I was actually in the scenes you were describing. I'm surprised this story doesn't have more reviews. |
