Please continue

Aw, thanks! This is a wonderful story, though. Suspense, action, it's got it all. You're way better than me.

What's the word I'm thinking of? Oh yeah. AWESOME.

Awesomely well-written!

:)

About the response about what i said about Scourge, i was just being truthful & besides have you ever heard the expression " The Truth Hurts?" BTW keep up the total awesomeness.

This is cool, you don't really see any Manic stories around, so keep up the good work.

I had never thought Jet & Bean were behind this plan the entire time, well they get the same punishment & that is by being rubbed in Spencer Franklin Ricardos' really super, ultra, & mega disgusting smelly, gross, & proud of it armpits. BTW keep up the awesomeness of the story though.

One one hand, they make it out with a few injuries, but on the other hand...
I really wonder what's going on with Shadow! Update soon!

I was thinking that Scourge needs a punishment, what do you think?

I see you put alot of work into each chapter individually, seeing how each one is sort if an adventure in itself. Long story short,
GOOD JOB!

I was laughing up until the end. Then I was like " . ... CRAP!"

INTENSE CRAP GOING DOWN!
XD

Seriously, though. Good job.

Yes, it is wise to listen to an annoyed Shadow. Unless you WANT to get Chaos Speared, it's your choice.

Funny. Some OOC Silver but that makes it better. The last sentence made me shiver. All together, great work!