I feel bad for Naruto but now I also feel bad for Sasuke...poor Uchiha he's a mess...he really loves Naruto...

I feel so bad for Minochi having to deal with his bf's n parents constantly fighting, I feel bad for Naruto being treated so bad by Sasuke, Naruto put his life on the line to give Sasuke a child and still Sasuke was an asshat and dosen't even believe Minochi is his child and then he goes and assumes Naruto is fucking Gaara, like Naruto is some slut or something! AND THEN SASUKE CALLED NARUTO A WHORE WTF!

I feel like Naruto is sick with something bad...

XD Sasuke has been reminding me of that song 'If I ever' by YG

I'm so glad Naruto came to rescue his baby, Minochi definantly needs his mommy, Sasuke can go fuck himself...I wonder what Naruto is sick with...

I feel so bad for Minochi...he's being emotionally and physically abused by his asshole of a father...he needs to go back with his mommy...

Sasuke is really pissing me off! Sasuke is a horrible father! Poor baby Minochi, he's scared and crying, Sasuke made him cry...the poor baby, I think Minochi is a sweetheart who deserves better, the poor child...he has a dying mommy and a heartless dad...

Sasuke isn't a very good dad...I feel bad for Minochi...he needs his mommy...

So Naruto is dying from some sickness, and Sasuke wants nothing to do with his son, I wonder why Sasuke and Naruto broke up, and I like Minochi, wonder how old he is, maybe 12?

I really like the idea of the story. It is very creative. Minochi is such an adorable character. The concept on how an illegal experiment going around and how one has to take medication postpartum/after delivery, very well done. Quite a logical take there.

However, the plot that has penned out? Sorry, not fancy it much.

Sasuke is such a jerk to deserve Naruto, especially when he accused naruto cheated on him when he is going through a very difficult 2nd pregnancy. Itachi should have snatched him up imho. He said he would when sasuke lose his last chance, which honestly i think has long past due. I enjoyed reading it despite some painful story plot but when he was intentionally paralysed, i just feel, "god no. Of course sasuke would like this. Naruto has no choice anymore. He's practically a prisoner. He cannot run anymore." It's horrifying, honestly. With how sasuke has been throughout this story, it is impossible he can change like flipping a switch on.

Anyhow, a good attempt to write this out. I read through it all and i love how warm and loving naruto is towards minochi especially. Thank you for writing this fic and share it out for us to read!

Aya wanderlust

Poor sasuke but it isn't all naruto's fault I mean the kid appears out of nowhere when they are about to do something naughty xD hahaha is as if he knows and is there to stop them just like sasuke said a cock blocker that is what his son is right now hahaha

I been looking for this story for a long time (I didn't remember if it was mpreg or female Naruto). Loved this story (love jealous Sasuke) this is my second time reading it

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I wanna see what happens next! Does the 'sicko' live or not?

Wtf! My first thought was that they cut his Legs off...damn I'ma horrible person...