Reviews for Don't Let it Fall to Pieces
Hero Dean chapter 32 . 9/26/2015
,love it
MKramer81319 chapter 29 . 3/16/2015
Is Leah gonna imprint on Matt!? Please make it so!
darkpercy5 chapter 33 . 2/11/2015
I like it. Please continue.
Debbie Hicks chapter 33 . 1/10/2015
34,
Chapter 34.
it happened had this pain then it was real then all of the Sudden I let out this Scream then it happened to me then suddenly the tape went CRASH! The Sacs were altered then all of the teeth went very too straighten it had a whopping and trimazillions or bazillions of wallop of deadly poison a lot of of it then my hair went more Chairriest red then with my god hideous eyes of Red then suddenly had a Biggest idea to give blood easyiest then was getting too sick with the Both best friends and called help I have to hunt that's it you are CHOW I Must DESTROY EACH THREE NOW! I Flashed to with Bella with oh god with as all help then suddenly Attacked with each three and all of the sudden wre all of the blood from both then all of the sudden I was still a Hissing and a primal GROWL Went right at a Long mousiest girl then Attacked by Giving Venom but all of the sudden speeding off then herself what-what you do I am so hungry I have a Ruptured stomach as well Welcome to the Army you are MINE! The it happened a lot of each four cities deaths and murders and killings and we were speeding up gathing my troops then all of the sudden Attacking the Vulcans were all of them drained of blood a whoppining good size of blood who then the Senior Volturi guard it's Scarlett gone wild she is CARNIVOROUS Giving blood and turned her with the each both are Hog wild but all of them were Suffering they must be Destroyed then it happened with the Cullens with as very tribazillions or as all mazillions with the hybrid with the three Native American pack were with each both Scarlett you gone Wild but you went Rouge onto Blood of the both with you and them are Your Creations are Unfit to HUMANITY WIPE THEM OUT FELIX! That our unification of very as all of both young and old but suddenly Screamed but a all of the Suddenly Destroyed ourselves from both with them suddenly RIP! Torn us as all of all pieces but suddenly took as three away but reformed and resurrected but suddenly risen from death but lost the ablity to mate but each three had Kids after turned but with the three had with as each both destroyed had children oh my God I Am a Imprinted with his sister with her mate killed but gained Eight Kids after Turned into the Interplanetary Lyans we are Cursed but it is gone but our daughter healed looks older it happened with as all of them killed each three where are we in the Inbetween I have terrible news it with the as very as all of the destroyed five are Cut from here you met your grisliest fates but lost the ablity to have kids teleported as all the places but with the cities from around the world with as all the everything it is closed with it it went very too wrong with as all with the wholliest white house everything but newest places built but the sign teleported but it happened Exploding and went a BLAST! By Echoing a loudest rage from myself then with sharpest noise in history but became a new species losing as all of the bodies and very tribazillions as all of with as all of the Cloned Animals lost the ablity but had young a lot with as all Dogs and Cats but all the sudden causing as very all of them wuith each tfour with the two to have kids Again but it happened we were onto the planet Vulcan mixed the races with but what this more as all of the remains but it happened Exploding it all of it very loudest but hard trumpeting raging noise then a BLAST From here striking the both each both suddenly lost the ablity to mate at all of the sudden burned Earth but had a terrifying race with the looks of us/as all of them more Vampires from as all of them onto planets now it was all over the planets Colonized but taken but we became Detites but we were protected by the Gods of Mount Olympus became supernature beings again then it was too late the planet was cleansed of the dead screaming but the Volturi heard this we were not human at all haunting Earth into a Endless limbo erupting powrs a lot of powers then all of the sudden we not strong but powerfully athletic but fit ourselves wrre Wild we were Nomadic they were furious onto as all of them forming covens and clans and tribes as all of them were unable to see us or hear us but lost our way back we are unable to find our way back to Earth but we now haunt but it happened exploding but dropped as all bodies looked radiant but young looking I was fit as a fiddle stronger as a Ox powerful as a Bucking donkey had the strength of Hercules they all wore the NASA Created but made us with as all of the Survivors to wear from the 1985 movie Mad Max: Beyond Thunderdome was Paul's Favorite movie forcing us to battle for Survival to fight but training very harder for Dominance of this planet oh my God you mean to fighting and killing oh god food and a Beer and Wild Women oh! CLANG! Three times onto their heads Ow Yeouch OUCH! Ouch how brutal watch it Shrimp Eeeeeeep oh no he went sheet white of him leaner taller Muscular welcome e to the Pack now March Oommmph! Sir! he is very violent but each both Supernatural races had a foe the Volturi coven banded together to form a coven of their own the young Vulcan woman was dressed from the movie Mess with us you are Sushi you killed us and them we will SURVIVE Hear us we are Warriors! we CONTROL YOUR PLANET! Zafina we are Warriors Momma mia what the catch in honor of three there is a fourth Mad Max movie it is known as Mad Max: Road Fury of 2015 coming soon Crap YO! Pack it's a WOMAN! SPIT What is that Oh Momma Sorry we need to rebuild watch it Excuse us they were dressed like Warriors were very tall and Muscular three times built of their muscles then a scout reported they have taken over and Dominated your world lies in ruins fighting for survival and controlling it all completely they are not human but mutated people wearing from let me see oh Crap it's a ARMY! What a ARMY! They are dressed from the 1985 movie Mad Max Beyond Thunderdome in a America changed but cloaked but they became destroyed but trapped we were invisible to a unseen eye we were tireless by now they we terrified of us as the controllers of Earth the very as all of the survivors were hideous by now but became tribes of vampires followed from us it's working yes then it was finished.
Ultimate Slytherin 2001 chapter 33 . 1/10/2015
Dun dun dun...
Maiannaise chapter 33 . 1/10/2015
Ohhh damn! Matthew is gonna be here for a long time! Bet Seth's jumping for joy (more like planning his murder)
Maiannaise chapter 32 . 12/27/2014
I like that Scarlett is first to look after Renesmee. And it's Rosalie and Scarlett mothering her instead of just Rosalie
Maiannaise chapter 31 . 12/21/2014
Oh God, how's Seth and the pack going to react with Scarlett there?
heather.marie.39982 chapter 31 . 12/21/2014
This is really good! Are you gonna have scar help the Cullens from being destroyed by the pack?
Debbie Hicks chapter 29 . 12/7/2014
30.
Chapter 30
it happened I gotten so Sick very sick suddenly the both wre Burning me very hot then suddenly Burned for Seven days all of it went very wrong it turned my own Green eyes a Horrifying Red oh my god I was very sick the tape Erupted fangs then I felt so weid then Screamed a light from my chest and suddenly a Witness fled into the palace then spoke Scarlett died here Ancients she been Reincarnated as a Imprinted Vampire hunted the Vulcans and Drained their blood alive is Gifted with Shaman gifts to see the dead Cursed with Immortality what we do on her she is still killing more Vulcan enjoys the hunt and Suddednly Accused of murder then while Hunting Vulcans was very sick and the Volturi guard sighted my Blood red eyes Surrendered you Scarlett are forbidden To Consort with a what he is Werewolf he is my Mate then Suddenly was Fearful and suddenly Hissing was very vicious but Gave up a menacing Snarling roar but Growled with as all of very Then Suddenly Alice Reappeared Scarlett what is wrong with you it's her Stomach she ate very way far too extremely much and Killed us as very as all of us drinking the blood of us Vulcans had Biggest but the more largest more mature children and bit us as all of right on our Neck's central of the Necks and drank our blood Scarlett you are not human at all but his Embraced imprint oh my god Someone call a Doctor I am fine it fully threw up ugh I am so hungry I want blood to survive it is you killed them in the Hoh Forest intermixing with Animal blood the newspapers reported a Killing by myself discovered more Vulcans as all of them drained of their blood as all of them suddenly wearing differently clothes loose red hair and Bright Red eyes so fearful then my skin was Extremely white with as all of them suddenly Gathering up both races and begun a Army coven of my own with help of Eating both suddenly went too far very too far and began to lead them then after their honeymoon and the child she bore ask Permission to turn her it was Granted to turn her daughter to Share both it was too late to protect them it suddenly then Bittten them both as all of the Venom from Bees and the truest Bats all of the sudden Screamed as far it went suddenly lost her bot from her daughter was now a Heir of her Both as all of it suddenly crunched three then let it heal then suddenly had a Born Vampire daughter without trouble we Witness and hear we fight and speak ye for Raeneesme Carile Cullen who's with me so that was it became a Warrior time whisked as Reneesme Cullen imprinted by Jacob Black with both places it happened Around the world with our own suddenly Exploding but with a very thunderous but loudest and the veru more monstrous and all of the sudden with their turn turned families killed and murdered you guessed the Volturi guard had us killed with as all of them removed as their Prizes as very tribazillions as all of them very way more monstrous and more massive and all of them Extinct us/them forgotten the bones then crumbling into new houses then it was all over all of the sudden they all of them had our looks and they were the Artemista were hideous creation ourselves squashed like Eggs but suddenly bound to the same changed town but it was too late the bodies into lead but had eight kids then stopped and never had with as all of them suddenly my Screech of death warned them came real the Artemista Exploded left behind more children they reported to their adopted families forced to suffer their fate and could not return were punished we guarded them and all of the sudden as very each both with them lost their minds joined us and suddenly released Carnivorous members them it was all over then all of the sudden we never died at all but had to be Guardians of death Everything changed bound this place forgotten by time's Limbo then it happened scared them they fled from here and all of sudden we haven't aged a lot became ancient beings and the Volturi suddenly took as all rights from as all humanity joined us in Death but became Bound and they found as very all both dead then suddenly Banished each both to Vulcan to be nationals then it was over Crashed with the remaining and all of humanity with Extraterrestrials but suddenly Exploding right outside then Shattering then blew up trapped in here forever young then it was all over cursed to sense events then it violently broken ourselves with as all to planets created foes they all of them Ruled.
I am the Story Teller chapter 29 . 12/8/2014
I have some really bad feels about Matthew. Don't like him. At all. Just something about him being half-siren, and that those were often selfish or bad or something... Don't like him. But I love ryour story though, it's great!
Maiannaise chapter 29 . 12/7/2014
Ooo, can't wait for the surprise then! :)) I like Scarletts representation on the wedding most don't put enough detail on it
heather.marie.39982 chapter 28 . 11/30/2014
I just read chapter 28 and this whole story is amazing! Please update soon!
heather.marie.39982 chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
I am already loving it! Eventhough I'm on the first chapter haha.
Maiannaise chapter 28 . 11/29/2014
Great chapter, looking forward to see Seth's personality evolve more as Matthew stays longer
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