Reviews for Captivity
Txtornado65 chapter 12 . 2/3
I know its been forever but please update
kathdng12 chapter 12 . 6/11/2019
Hi
I like your story and I really want to know the sequel
So can you please update
Thank
Stella Novellas chapter 12 . 1/27/2019
I read this whole story a year or so ago, left italone to catch up on updates, reread the whole thing. I'm crying because it's so good and crying because there hasn't been an update in almost three years. I hope there's still a chance for this story to continue!
Justarandomgirl chapter 12 . 8/11/2018
Damn this is one intense story hope that you'd update soon
1-leopardspots-2 chapter 12 . 8/6/2018
Please keep on writing this story! It's so good and there needs to be more LyLu in this world!
Black Dragoniss chapter 12 . 7/24/2018
please update again soon... did Lucy get all of her keys back... what will happen when the guilds find out about Lucy and Lyon
GajeelRedfoxfan808 chapter 12 . 6/30/2018
Okay, so I want to say how much I love this story. I'm truly in love with it. Everything is well written, and everything is planned out perfectly. Nicole4211 and Leoslady4ever, you are both amazing writers.

You made this love story start off at the right pace; slow and steady at first, but then made it blossom. It is great to see how it didn't start off in the first chapter, and I liked how you two made it grow in time. I also want to say thank you for making this story about Lyon and Lucy. This is a pairing that doesn't have much popularity, but how this story set everything up, I can totally picture the two together. Their personalities were spot on, and I loved how you made the two personalities fit together. It was so believable! And may I give a big shout out to NOT making the OC's too powerful. Thank you a million times over.

The only "problem" I have is how you left everything off on a cliffhanger. I hope to see this story continued, and I hope to see it end one day. To end this review, I want to say (again) how great you two did, and to keep up the good work. :)

- Gajeelredfoxfan808
Bibi chapter 12 . 6/29/2018
I really love the story and can't stop wondering what would happen in next chapter... I've read this story over and over but still can't get enough from it. Please continue this story... thank u...
Guest chapter 1 . 6/7/2018
I've been waiting about a year for you to update. Please continue the story I really want to know what happens :")
twizt312 chapter 12 . 6/1/2018
this is such a good LyLu story. I hope you update soon
Reader Protagonist chapter 12 . 4/12/2018
Um. I don't recall getting to chapter 12 that soon. I need more. Please Please Please I'll do anything! There's not enough LyLu love in the fandom.
ManderNaner chapter 12 . 3/11/2018
This is really a very good story. I love the tales you both weave. I was on the edge of my seat half the time they were stuck in that place but I had a strong feeling that was only going to be part of the plot.

I'm a big NaLu person but I truly do love a pairing that can make sense. And you did that beautifully here. I find it will be very hard for them to separate after this and I'm sure they won't so soon. I'm curious to see how their partners and guild mates are going to react to everything.

It's a shame this hasn't been worked on in so long but I can always understand life and priorities can change. I'm still going to follow this just in case you ever pick it back up again because it's such an awesome story. It's the first LyLu I've ever read and I'm now partial to them, even if it's only in this story.

I'm going to imagine what could potentially happen next while I hope for an eventual continuation. Either way, thanks for the hard work and awesome read!
stuffandstuffings chapter 12 . 1/16/2018
Holy crap..that was sad...but my name is Abby...and his sisters name is Abby...am I...am I his sister? lol anyway,this was damn great! I hope you update soon! This was awesome!
AnnaDreyar chapter 12 . 12/11/2017
Por favor, termine essa história!
Guest chapter 9 . 9/15/2017
Your fanfictions are very good i you continue this one
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