Oh, that's sweet. Dramatic, tragic to some degree, but, since we are provided with a happy end, sweet. I first thought, well, little dialog, huge plot steps, but given the mental cinema we all have, I see a full "season" of stories/episodes. The story scratches on a couple of things that send any Chuck fan's fantasy into overdrive, so these few 3.021 words tell a much bigger story. As usual when beginning with a new author (new for me, that is), I try to select the earliest story - I was not disappointed and, as Schwarzenegger said, "I'll be back" - for more stories by Grayroc.

My kind of story and to bad nobody got a courage to expand it what will would be if Sarah betray Chuck in some similar way like this great one shot.

Nice little story. Great to see Beckman and Graham get what they deserved, somewhat. Casey got off a bit easy. A touch disappointed that you took the "conditioned to do it' way out for Sarah. If you go the way of her making the decision to betray Chuck, especially by using his love against him, and then threatening him at gunpoint then she should have ownership of her decisions and actions. She has proved to him that she will even go as far as to sleep with him to manipulate him. Whilst it may have been the case it would have been nice to see Sarah overtly making the sacrifice of her career to support Chuck through testimony. That way she is seen to earn some redemption rather than be gifted forgiveness by a Chuck with no control over his life.

I stumbled across this by accident and i'm really glad i did, this is so good, so many twists throughout, surprising ending as well, i was expecting it to go the other way.

Wow, this AU makes so much sense! It plunges the knife in and twists it perfectly, and despite the rough sort of styling, again, the ideas are so compelling that I can’t help reading and reading and reading... You’ve got great ideas, and you’re clearly improving your writing skills, when I compare the writing style of La Belle to this! Keep writing, keep writing! :)

Pretty good. I enjoyed it.

Incredibly angst filled story but very entertaining. Still something here for the shippers. Good work.

You know, I think I didn't favorite this back when you first wrote it because it seemed just so damaging. But it read a lot more optimistic to me this time. It's still one of those where I would have liked a little bit of "what comes next" just because I struggle with imagining how this relationship will find normal.
But it feels much more "up" to me than it did several months ago, and I enjoyed it quite a lot this time.

Pretty good story.
Would have liked to see it continue.

Wow, this was a great story! Totally original! It would be cool if you'd add an update to this. Sarah's reaction and how the future holds for them. Think about it. :)

Great story love how you actually included graham and Beckmann getting hammered it always amazed me during the show that no one ever touched the fact that the CIA and NSA are not allowed to operate covertly on US soil. Great work

Very nice! An epilogue would be nice. Beckman working in an Orange Orange, Graham still in a Bunker and Chuck and Sarah with kids. Some puppies and kittens would be nice too, LOL! Sorry, my damn "Ladt Feelings" escaped again, I meant gunplay and explosions. Seriously nice job for a oneshot.

Nice one shot, thought treatment of Casey was a little harsh, especially when your key witness had a psychotic break. Glad to find out Sarah is a dog person.

Well done! I enjoyed this lovely one-shot story very much. Very well written.

From a fellow Canadian, welcome to the club and please keep writing .

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Nice. Thank you for writing this.