This was a great story, I loved it! Thank you so much for commiting to this, I know a lot of authors who start and end up with like three chapters and leave with the biggest cliff hanger ever. Thank You! ( I love your writing )

Omg I am not supposed to be up right now and I almost woke my mom up from laughing at that fish comment!

Well, that was quite an easy way to get rid of good ol' Val :D. Fatally Yours and Fatally Mine are such great stories, and they were absolutely worth my tears(I get rlly emotional while reading don't judge) and my time

I just wanna say, the way that you write Sebastian's relationship w/ everyone is literally amazing. Some authors have the characters forgive each other for major things in one chapter! You take it slow, and I really appreciate that

Meline 4life

I loved the idea of the story and I think the first part Fatally Yours was awesome! I just wished that you hadn't lost the desire to write this story and was able to finish it in a better way. I really love that Sebastian started off "evil" but was able to make a change. You're stories are great and I hope you keep writing about things that make you passionate!

This full thing is two of the best fanfic i have ever read

i loved this story, the plot, the characters, the random twists. i cant wait to read the rest of ur stories. thank u so much for creating this

i think it is a really good ending!

Blargh

Maline?
Celax?

OOH I SHIP IT

Oh wee rape! I have to read this NOW! Rape is so romantic!

I loved this story.

I appreciate that you tried to write a better end but in all honesty I'm glad you stopped. Please don't take this in a mean or nasty way. I just feel like the story was a little drug out. It was a good story don't get me wrong but I think that it could have ended differently and without the extra hassle of a sequel for you.

I just reread both of these stories and they just make me so damn happy and also a little sad but that's not the point.