keep it up. Udate soon

Cool chapter can't wait for the next chapter i liked the different techniques that you created for naruto to use

Liked the first chapter, but then you dropped the ball here with the body switch. Just keep the son of Mavis in Fairy Tail and don't bring canon Naruto and the Naruto world into this.

like XD

Hmm...-frowns thoughtfully- Some serious work is needed to be done on this. Firstly the grammar part..you should really get a beta or something...and the switching of their 'souls' or whatever your idea was, it was wrongly timed. I mean you haven't even written his life as a Fairy Tail member enough for the readers to get a better view on his personality and his life of course. If I were to suggest something, I'd say he should stay with fairies for couple of years then maybe on some mission their souls switch places. And the timeline for Naruto verse could be a couple months before his graduation, because hey, he needed to learn a whole new and different source of power. And while I support his plans of burning down he village, I don't suppose he would announce something like that out in open. He's smart, he knows better than that. About Uchiha...as he was at that time, I suppose his character was not well written. He would never -I repeat never, willingly teach anyone. Because why would he? He needed power..he was obsessed with it. Moreover, he was arrogant and why on the earth would he waste his time on a dead last? Even with a personality change?
And one more thing that is absolutely ridiculous is that if his grades were that good why in the world would you team them together again? That doesn't even makes sense! And no one can re-ceate a jutsu just by looking at a picture of it. And he doesn't even has fire affinity. The main is wind. Water or earth is reasonable but fire on the other hand...nope. Plus you need to show his progress in a convincing manner. Don't rush ot. Patience is the key, as they say.

Sorry about the long comment, mostly my ramblings but I thought this story could do so much better.

Well that was a bust. Are you coming back or should I just give up? The first chapter was looking really good.

Hope you find the drive to redo the second chapter soon, you had a good thing started and I'd really like to see it grow to it's potential.

So he's like Mystogen? Huh

I feel like it'd be better for its potential to redo that chapter.

Awesome story I hope you continue

fix the grammer and add more detail then deal

Hey can you keep this story with the original naruto you did in chapter 1 staying in his world and just ditch the other naruto altogether in fact just get rid of the other world or do it as a separate story.

I'm a bit torn I think you should have just carried on with the one Naruto sure make a twist if you want but I duno this might have been a bit much for me.

get a beta and include more background and detail in conversations and of people and the story and get a beta u need grammar help

Some suggestions...
1) A period is your friend. There's plenty of long run on sentences that could have used a period here and there.
2) Proofreading once is good, twice is even better before posting
3) When you are done proofreading it yourself, have a beta proofread it, they might catch some mistakes that you have missed