Very good! It realy fits Keroro! But who is 'the one'? Koyoki?

These poems are very powerful. They tell a full story with just a few words. It's quite beautiful to see the emotion captured in so short a length of space. The loneliness... but in the end someone called out to him

I like this poem. Good Job on the writing. :)

I love this poem. There is hardly anyone who can really understand Dororo-kun on this site. And the last two lines are so moving. I'm hopeless at poetry appreciation, whether it's in Chinese or in English, but I can comprehend this poem clearly. Because something you want to express in this poem is just what I hope to say from the bottom of my heart. Though this is a little short and not very many things can be written in. Please keep updating, I look forward to reading more from you.