Cute story!

This is so good i am gonna cry! Just played the remake and now i'm in for all these stories :3

I LOVED your story. I realize this was written as a birthday gift but if you ever add more chapters, I'd be eager to devour them as well.

great story!
the last part going from eating chips together(freakin' cute!) to kissing was a bit short,
but overall everything was good.
loveley reading!

aw, this is so cute. it's written very seriously despite the funny parts.
i love it.
cheers
Maya

This was beyond amazing. That I am sad that it isn't a chapter story, i feel like it is better than many I have read.

This is adorable

This is so good! I loved reading it. :) Thanks for sharing your writing!

Good.

UGH THIS FIC is definitely one of the best sephikura's I've read so far IT GAVE ME SO MANY FEEEELZ. :'D What stood out to me about this fic in particular was that you wrote Sephiroth being vulnerable, I guess, with his mako shots, since it seems to be believed by most people as though Sephiroth is sort of invincible. So there was something kinda alluring seeing him all out of whack and needing help :') And, even more alluring with /Cloud/ helping him because that's also kind of a rare thing to read. :3 But it was sooo lovely and AWWW and it was so cute to have him play nurse to Seph like Zack did for him (i love zack so much too GIVING HIM A SHOWER AND HE DIDNT EVEN KNOW HIS NAME X'D but rly hes amaze as usual).

And besides that, I also like that you wrote Seph as being sad and very...humane I guess? XDD Not being the oh so powerful and I-will-cut-you-with-my-goregous-eyelashes-fear-me-but-also-love-me Sephiroth lmao. You wrote him a lot more realistically than even how he was in CC because I always thought it was weird that they never showed him grieving over Angeal (I always assumed he did, of course, they just didnt want to include it for some reason) and that when he shows up in Junon to see Zack he's like perfectly normal like it never happened. But how you have him here is more like how I expected he'd be after Angeal died (and Genesis too, for this fic), having him be sensitive about their loss was really realistic and it also kind of was a way for Cloud to be able to worm his way into his heart haha because I don't know if Gen and Angeal were around if he'd pay as much attention to Cloud otherwise.
Which brings me to, the overall plot and pace of this was perfectly well done, the way Cloud goes from "cadet passed out in the waiting room that I helped" to "cadet that saved me from the labs" to "cadet that I talk to every so often and like being around" to "CADET THAT I CHERISH" was great :DDD. there is a six year gap between them after all (which i dont think all authors realize or acknowledge :'D) and so, their relationship here being mostly platonic and then eventually a bit romantic was awesomee and just. yeah I have written a lot here already geez BUT YEA I JUST LOVED EVERY SECOND OF THIS AND YOUR SEPH IS THE BEST AND JUST NEVER STOP WRITING OK? :3 A job.

Nice story.
I like it. :o)

Wark! (This issa gud story TobiTobi! Boko wantsta hava SOLDIERpuppy showah tu! SOLDIERpuppy looked like him was vewy gud at shampooin hair…..Boko is also happy that FluffCloud made it tu SOLDIER, FluffCloud must hav warked vewy hawd and Boko finks him dida gud job on hims fust mishun. Boko finks it’s not vewy nice of people to hide fwom Seffy-wof inna eley-vator….Boko wud talk tu him. Boko is glad that FluffCloud halped Seffy-wof wen him didn’t feel gud, is gud tu hav halp….But Boko wanted tu eats wif them tu. Boko is happy they is best gud fwiends now. Yu issa vewy gud writerer TobiTobi, Boko wishes him cud write like yu. Sankyu for yu story….OH! And happy late birfday tu yu fwiend Bookchick!)

Cute!

"I desire... cheeseburgers." That has got to be the most adorable thing I've ever read Sephiroth say. This whole fic was adorable, and fun, and heart-warming, and well-written, and in character for everybody. Needless to say, I loved it. :)

So cute.