Wow!

I almost quit several times. For a while, I thought I was in the middle of a Fellini film! If I had not already read MANY of your HP stories, I probably would have. As it is, I'm glad I persevered.

Interesting read, but I hope you have that out of your system.

That was nice.

I think the friendship not love thing was a bit over done, especially if it's supposed to be up to us to decide.

Perhaps in counterpoint the paradise thing could have been a bit more overt? It was supposed to get them past their physicality barriers, they're attracted to each other, right? He puts the label on her dress and it shrinks and he finds her attractive, she finds him attractive, and they get comfortable with it.

But it's never really stated that they find each other attracted, or that they get comfortable with it, it's just tiptoed around.

I think that would make a good balance so it's more up in the air at the end.

Anyway, just a little niggle, this is super well written and I really enjoyed it, that's the biggest thing I had and it's tiny, which is great!

Thanks for writing this, I enjoyed reading :)

Dunno what's going on here but my first thought is that everything isn't real, like it's a dream or a temporary reality since either Hermione's blessing or Harry drinking the potion.

I forgot something with my review..
You let harry mention a way how a computer console or game works... wtf? he can't know nor does he have the information for it. He lived in a cupboard and a small bedroom later with broken thinks of dudley and got nothing himself.

I.. damn.. this is written so good but so confusing. I barely didn't want to read it anymore after the first pages but tried my best. Cause it revolted me in 4th year already hermione decided for harry and herself to be with ginny and ron no matter what! it's maybe more natural down the line instead of later years but rather have that instead so early so sickening. What ron did/say hense 3 years preview and hermione wants him ugh..

That spectre of hermione is not her future self isn't it, cause it worries me for them.
Have they gone back to hogwarts, how did they explain her death?

And ugh.. always that stupid brother/sister thing just come on! both don't have one so they don't know what it is. And certainly 4th year can't be that damn strong that months alone like any person woman/man will do is grow closer and do it. (berhapse 7/8th year and they are not together it transformed more of a family sense)

d3

Holy. Cow. Never reading a story like that EVER again. I was having a blast up until the time-turner; that's when you took my brain out of my head, dropped it on the ground, beat it with a bat, threw it in a grinder, and poured it to the dogs. Never EVER reading a time-travel story ever again. You basically lost me half-way through.

All and all, the story was great, but wow...

Wait they DID NOT have a loving friendship Hermione turned her back on Harry in goblet of fire remember when she passed on Ron's message but not Harry's message and said I'm not a owl then walked away even tho she knew someone was trying to hurt Harry anyone that thinks that's a loving friendship has no idea what friendship is she is worse then Ron at least he has a reason he's jealous of Harry what's Hemoines reason? That's why I will never read any fanfiction with them as a couple Harry and Ginny forever

I'm happy to finally understand what was happening and thrilled to see them living happily ever after. I wish you had included the death eaters getting what they deserved, but the happy ending is what I most wanted, so thank you very much. I'm happy to think they are very much in love, albeit a bit confused as to what love really is. Thanks for writing!

Ok, I went back and read the prologue, but it seemed like Hermione wasn't there either, so I'm still confused and also sad. Hoping next chapter will give me my much needed happy ending. Thanks for writing!

This is getting intense! Thanks for writing!

Thank you for your explanations at the end of each chapter. They help me understand what is happening, and this one gives me hope for them falling in love; the romantic love I crave for them. Thanks for writing!

Very grateful I don't have to wait for the next chapter, even though it is already way past my bedtime, I have to know what happens next!

This was not only a difficult chapter to write. It was difficult to read as well. Brave, selfless Hermione trying so hard to save everyone else. Thanks for writing.

Hermione has it even worse than Harry had it, and I want to hurt every one of those awful brats! Just saying. Thanks for writing!