| Reviews for Adventures of Gabriel Rossi |
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   Jason Vander Vlugt chapter 2 . 7/26 interesting story |
| ItzREDOne chapter 1 . 7/12 A Question will this man x man fanfic or will it be man x woman? |
| iWasDamned chapter 1 . 8/30/2019 its mukuro not mokuro |
| candace.m.olufs chapter 2 . 1/3/2019 I like it so far. The only thing I would say is to maybe have somebody proof read it. So far I have seen some really obvious mistakes like using defiantly instead of definitely and using spouse instead of supposed. The weird mistakes like those are a bit jarring and I end up thinking more about that then about the story. |
| natt7 chapter 32 . 3/14/2018 Supongo que esperaré :3 |
| YueHiiro03 chapter 32 . 3/14/2018 Take your time we will wait |
| Yukisora chapter 2 . 3/11/2018 Désolé Sorry Merci Thanks Monsieur Mister I am French I can give you many other words |
| Zezeisanidiot chapter 1 . 11/26/2017 I hope you update a new chapter soon. |
| Zezeisanidiot chapter 1 . 11/26/2017 I hope you update a new chapter soon. |
| tatipi2262 chapter 31 . 9/7/2017 Plz Update soon |
| Guest chapter 18 . 4/12/2017 what is wrong with those spelling man? "defiantly locked." don't you mean definitely? I know some people say it like defIantly (or something like that) but really? you need to edit your work. Get someone to look over it with you. (yeah. how DID you pass your English?) |
| Hyakuma chapter 6 . 2/2/2016 Are you sure the character is a boy? O.O cause he don't seem like it. |
| Hyakuma chapter 5 . 2/2/2016 Bakuran? O.O |
| hopper.codelyoko chapter 20 . 10/15/2015 AND DID I MENTION IT'S MUKURO NOT MOKURO WHO IN THE NAME OF HelL IS MOKURO |
| hopper.codelyoko chapter 18 . 10/15/2015 What is with all that spelling?! 'Plain in the air' 'walked threw' etc Even the grammar is wrong how tf did you even pass your English |
