"True ... From a certain point of view? I see, now that is a good classic Star Wars reference.

This was pretty good. Nice interactions and I liked the joke “I don’t know if this man needs a doctor or a mechanic. I like that they are trying to save Vader (“Anakin”) and the change to his real name does symbolize the changes Vader went through in hopefully regaining his humanity.

Another good chapter. I liked the changes to the throne room fight and it was a pretty exciting space battle scene. Nice job.

Another good chapter. I like the wisdom Luke is gaining from Amada. The slightly dicey discussion concerning Leia was fun too. I am very interested to find out what R2 has to say about Luke’s parents. Are you sticking to cannon with Amidala or making it someone else entirely?

I liked the joke about the blaster in his pocket. I liked the action scenes at the end here. This made for a nice chapter with the defeat of Jabba. I feel like it is a deviation from cannon for the Mandalorian armor to be so easily penetrated, but that is ok. Good chapter overall.

Another good chapter. I liked the addition of Qui-Gon Jinn. Well placed for the discussion of who can help Luke. Good chat about not letting your emotions rule you. Adama seems wise and will likely prove a good influence on Luke. I am curious about what he will say about the attachment rule.

I enjoyed Leia reflecting on her kiss with Luke and that it felt like kissing a brother (somehow she had always known)…. I liked the meeting between the republic crew and Luke and Leia. Now apparently they will be going to look for Han Solo. That is great. Good chapter.

That was a good setup and a good introduction. I enjoyed the interpersonal stuff like “I love this girl, then added like a sister. Then the contact from Admiral Ackbar? Cool!

Good story line. A bit clipped and fast. Would have liked to have seen more development. I read the whole thing and enjoyed it.

Nice, I look forward to your next update as I love this story.

I kind of like the way this story ends. However, I feel as though it's pretty ambiguous. There could be a better way to end it on a more clear cut note, unless you are planning a sequel. In that case, it's the perfect way to end.

car I liked how you ended the story this was the best part to end the story with

Good chapter and ending to the chapter.

Thanks for the update and the great story. I really liked it.

Awesome place to stop.
Really enjoyed this chapter.