| Reviews for Crumple |
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Astrangefan chapter 8 . 8/6 This was incredible. I almost couldn’t bear chapter 8 and I can handle a lot of violence. But to have to that to someone you care about. Oh my God - that is torture in and of itself. I am glad you didn’t have them “sleep” together. That would have been unrealistic and painful even if it was consensual. And the fact that Draco kept telling her that she didn’t know what she felt because of the situation - that speaks of a maturity beyond his years. I am glad you ended it the way you did although a sequel would be nice. They have so much to recover from and I truly believe they can only do it together. They are the only ones who know the other’s pain. |
Ohgreatmyarmscomeoff chapter 11 . 7/29 Wow I wish I had more words than that. Beautiful. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24 so i just finished this entire fic and i came back to leave this review because this was really such a ride from start to end. i don't normally read angst or darker stuff, i prefer light and fluffy stories but this story was just so captivating and it had me cringing and wincing and nearly crying along with the characters the whole way. it was so beautiful to read and i felt like i could really see their emotions and pain and just how much they were feeling- all through your words. you really dealt with it all so well, from the trauma and hurt to the confusion and guilt and love, and while i'm always wary when stories deal with stockholm syndrome, i was intrigued by your objective in writing this and i truly believe you've done a wonderful job. thank you for this beautiful piece of work and i hope you keep writing! |
Guest chapter 6 . 6/9 This is incredibly well have really captured the trauma people go through. |
EmFog chapter 1 . 5/27 Great story. Wish there was a sequel! |
Brochi chapter 11 . 5/26 Ahhh that's it?! Loved this story, wish there was more! Great writing so powerful. Thank you! Hope H and D get the peace together they deserve xx |
Guest chapter 11 . 5/9 I love the story. |
themirrorminder.372259 chapter 8 . 5/9 oh gosh, please say there is a HEA for them? I don't think I could stomach them going through so much awfulness only to die at the end! |
themirrorminder.372259 chapter 7 . 5/9 WOW. This is so dark, and so horrific, but SO addictive and well written. Great job! |
Anescapewithinthepages chapter 1 . 4/12 I just had to drop by and say this was the first ever fanfic I ever read and it was the perfect way to dip my toes into this form of literature. This story is one of my all time favorites and I feel so blessed that it was my entrance into this fandom and fanfiction in general. |
Guest chapter 3 . 3/30 My heart is BREAKING for the two of them |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30 The portrayal was brilliantly done! |
Villaxheda NW chapter 11 . 2/29 I'm so fucked! Your story each ch made my heart ache .. I wish i could see them more in the ending Send love from 2020 |
Orrery chapter 1 . 2/27 Amazing story, but I wish you had expanded on the ending a little more! |
Guest chapter 11 . 2/16 Absolutely loved this story. Beautifully written. You deal with sexual and physical abuse after affects extremely well in this. I also love the fact that you recognise that Draco although physically the perpetrator was actually a victim of sexual abuse himself. Being forced to commit sexual acts to someone is also abuse. My also favourite bit was at the end when Hermione tells him oh shut the F up haha! Loved this story lots well done. |