lucky froakie teleported immediately

To be honest, I'm not usually into this kind of thing. Being trapped and forced to play a murder game just seems silly. I could never get into Dangan Ronpa.

Maybe it's just due to the fact that I'm a fan of the series and all the species, but this trilogy really hit the mark for me. I was engaged the whole time, with that sinking feeling in my gut in anticipation of what was going to happen. I keep overlooking the slew of grammar errors because there's a really solid plot under there, and I'm too enveloped in it to stop and chuckle at a typo.

After all that, I'm still left with an empty feeling in my gut from Slowking's death...it seemed like probably the most avoidable tragedy, but knowing him he's probably okay with being dead anyway.

This whole thing touched me. I can feel your soul in every chapter.
Thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to complete it without any of it being half-assed.

Well, and that's the end. It was sad, but for some reason, it was quite fitting. Growlithe died promising to change his ways, Mienfoo died alongside his comrade, and Treecko died for all the lives she's taken. It's sad, but it's fitting.

The ending was really sad but fluffy. It made me remember Breloom's and Lombre's scene in my own fic. xD

I wonder why no one tried to stop Mewtwo, though. Slowpoke remembers everything since the Memory Chamber is broken, and he knows that the Fantasy Games are still ongoing from the videos. Or maybe he doesn't try to stop Mewtwo because of grief?

This has been a nice ending to a nice trilogy, and I hate to see you go. Hey, maybe we could write something together sometime? We can write an awesome murder mystery, more awesome than both our fics combined. :D

Congratulations on finishing your trilogy, it's indeed an amazing accomplishment!

Hmm... it said there that Mienfoo hit Slowpoke's neck, which began to bleed... but I'm not sure that you can draw blood when you just hit someone. You can inflict black-and-blue marks, but not blood, I think. xD (I know because I practice martial arts. I've been punched many times, haha.) Come to think of it, few Fighting-type moves can draw blood.

This was a nice chapter. :)

[Each battler can only use one Pokemon.]

This would be OK in a battle against Trainers, but in a battle against Pokémon, this sounds kinda weird. xD

[Soon, all the illusions vanished.
But even the real one was gone.]

Ah, I love lines like these. They build up the suspense really nicely. Idk why but they remind me of Nightmare Guild. xD

The battle was really cool and action-packed. I was beginning to get disappointed in Treecko's battle when she was complaining about her Double Team clones, but that was before I knew that it wasn't the real Treecko at all. xD

Like you said, this does remind me of the battle between Treecko and Roselio. Nicely done!

[Treecko spun her head like a ray of light shining from a lighthouse.]

Hmm, I don't know why "like a ray of light shining from a lighthouse" is needed. I think we can understand pretty well without that here. xD

["Argh, stop embarrassing yourself. Just accept your punishment, I promise I would make it quick." Growlithe chided]

Like I said before, if you want to add "Growlithe added" in the end, the full stop should be substituted for a comma. :)

[Shut up Slowpoke. Pokemon, let me enlighten you on Slowpoke's master plan." Mewtwo snapped.]

Likewise.

[Double battle?" wondered Mienfoo.
"Shut up! We won't have double battles here, since the author is not very bright and doesn't know how to write a doubles battle, hence he would probably mess up this grand finale."

And suddenly, a handsome masked assassin sneaks up behind Mewtwo and stabs him through his heart, killing him instantly.

Who is he?

Not like the Pokemon cared anyway.

"OH MY ARCEUS YOU ARE OUR LIFE SAVER!" Growlithe screamed in delight.

"THANK YOU!" yelled Mienfoo.

"Well Mewtwo, that's what you get for insulting me." the sexy young handsome author remarked, before swaggering away.

"Hang on a second, if we are in this guy's universe, why didn't he save us earlier?" Slowpoke questioned.

"Well because I'm not here to save you, I just needed to punish this insolent brat!" the author laughed, before using his magical pen to draw another Mewtwo. "Now you better not try to insult me, you Psychic moron!" And with a super duper cool bow, the mysterious yet awesome author vanished, chortling at the sobs of the dejected Pokemon.

"Yes master. I will learn from the previous Mewtwo's mistake." the clone replied.}]

Umm, this may be personal opinion but I kinda don't like being interrupted in the middle of the story, it suddenly breaks readers' concentration. Especially because you've been building the suspense really nicely here.

I'm really liking how things are going! A battle like what Mewtwo wanted would be intense and thrilling! :D

Well done! The gloomier alternate ending was great! I don't know what else to say, but the sadism Mewtwo possessed was just intelligent. I'm not even sure with what I'm saying anymore.

Long waits will be fine as long as the story is awesome. Do you remember Whodunnit? If you could make those, that would be great. If you can't, then just watch the series, hehe. :)

So I guess that's it for now. A wonderful fanfics full of death! It's just awesome!

Ooh! What a battle!

I like the Kit Kat part and the commentator Mewtwo part. LOL!

It's a cool trilogy

Treecko is smart, but it seems like Growlithe's pride is stronger than that.

I'll have to see how the next round goes with the next update, so I hope to see the next update soon.

"Yeah, you are right... it is indeed unfair... Hmm... Uhh... But deal with it, suckers! Life is unfair!" –Mewtwo

That quote up there is so memorable and funny. XD Mewtwo is now one of my favorite fanfic villains.

Also, I won't pretend that the first ending didn't happen. Instead, I'll pretend that there's an off-screen scene in which Mewtwo made a request to Dialga, to turn back time.

That's all I have to say. You're writing still looks the same. I hope to see your next update soon.

First of all, congratulations for finishing the Fantasy Games trilogy! I think it's pretty impressive that you managed to finish it rather quickly. Consistence has never been my strong suit. "

Second, moving on to stuff I like. I personally like the ending of this fic. I'm happy that you made the readers relate back to the past and how the whole Games started using the "I'm the laziest" narrative all over again. The only difference is that at the very beginning, it was Slowking and in the end, it was Slowpoke who said it. I, strangely, also like Mienfoo. It's really cool how he evolved at exactly the right time. I'm also glad he survived.

Third, these are probably just my subjective opinions, but I found the consecutive battle chapters in the end rather tiring to read... But maybe that's just my personal preference. Oh, and there was another time when Growlithe and Mienfoo were so intent on killing Treecko, but then she decided to commit suicide again, and I think they switched from anger to pity towards her rather quickly...

Lastly, many thanks for mentioning me in the acknowledgments (and first, too!). I never thought my Nightmare Guild story would inspire anyone to write... and a trilogy at that, too! I was pleasantly surprised when you PMed me upon finding my story again and how it had inspired you to write, and it's amazing that the series is now finished. I'm flattered and honored.

I hope you continue to read my story with much... enthusiasm like you have been. And I hope you don't have to "pester" me for updates in the future. XD

That's all from me!

-Rozeria into the gloom-

I think you should make the next fanfic about Slowpoke, Growlithe, Treecko and Mienshao.
Looking forward to alternate ending
(I actually read this days or weeks ago but didn't log in.)

And I think Mewtwo should have learnt his/her lesson already. Poor Mewtwo getting whipped by Absol . That is harsh! (But seriously, everyday? I know he/she's just getting his/her desserts)

I like that ending. It was good in my opinion. I wish I have the time to write other Pokémon stories. I really want to make a Pokémon Whodunnit, but the riddles and modus operandi are quite a challenge for me.

By the way, I'm happy for Growlithe for what he became. The ending is really good!

I know you can still get ideas to make these kinds of stories, but it might take some time I guess, which will be fine for me though. So once you're done with the alternate ending, I'll just wait and see what you might still have. :)

Wow I'm so special. I get acknowledged. I haven't been on because school and family emergencies
kept me busy. I love then ending. Keep up the great work.
-Skitty