Reviews for New Beginnings - (ORIGINAL)
Guest chapter 7 . 4/14/2015
Update... Please
moon730 chapter 7 . 8/4/2014
update soon okay I think I'm in love with your story
0o chapter 7 . 7/29/2014
where's the rest of it?! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!
I LOVE THIS chapter 2 . 7/29/2014
THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS. IT IS AWESOME. 3
MWEH chapter 7 . 7/29/2014
They totally forgot about Evergreens question! XD
And Lyon sure appeared out of nowhere :P
MWEH chapter 6 . 7/26/2014
I'm curious, is Astrid RedStar? And Wendy BlueStar? But If they are, why isn't Astrid called RedStar then? Looking forward to next chapter, and I guess I'll have to wait to find out why it is like that :P
MWEH chapter 5 . 7/23/2014
I was actually going to name Erza and Jellals child Simon if I wrote a fic where they got a child, that is. Funny how we think the same :P
This sure is an interesting idea, its not the first story Ive read where their future children have travelled in time, but Im looking forward to see what their reason is in this story :)
TheSecretDreamer chapter 5 . 7/8/2014
Hi, your story has a lot of potential and is interesting :) however, you could use some proofreading before posting as I noticed some minor grammar and spelling mistakes but it's really not that big of a deal. Also, how old exactly is Astrid? And is Wendy the youngest child?