| Reviews for The Riddle |
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   rachel.olsenwilliams chapter 4 . 10/7/2019 I really enjoyed this story, thank you |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/21/2018 What a story! What a writer! What an experience! Thank. Dec 21..2018 |
| Theskyatdawn2 chapter 4 . 8/16/2018 Very good job. I loved the way it flowed and structure, dialogue, and character development was very well written. I just wish it continued and never ended. Other than some grammatical issues, you did an outstanding job of it. Well done. :-) |
| devilmaycryforever chapter 4 . 11/1/2016 i loved it! it was really nice and heart warming! |
| Nono chapter 2 . 9/7/2016 Great! The first half was like an entirely different story though, much more like other fanfics out there. The bit that fit with the first chapter was from after her family left. |
| Ellae chapter 4 . 8/30/2016 Oh my God. So first, I was thinking as I read sections 1-3 that I love your gorgeous language use and the elegant, witty phrases you use, although I find Sarah's characterization somewhat immature (yes... she's 18 but... I wish she weren't. I feel for Robert haha) and some of their arguments a touch repetitive/circular. However. That moment when Sarah laughed at Jareth- have read a great deal of fanfiction-a GREAT deal-and that line is going to stay with me forever. DAMN Sarah, go ahead with your bad self. One thing I noticed is occasionally I felt that Jareth may have been tricking her, which was exciting in its way (certain find have been great for that), but made me concerned for Sarah to the point that I wasn't sure if I really liked this Jareth (lusted for him, absolutely). Not sure why I feel so protective of Sarah. Call me a Baby Lobbyist Great read. |
| Stephycats7785 chapter 4 . 8/20/2016 This story was just great. The characters remained true to themselves and you wrote it in such a way it was like you could actually see the story unfolding. I have to admit the image of the goblin king playing Mario had me laughing out loud so great job! You have real talent when it comes to writing |
| ThisAccountIsOnTheFritz chapter 4 . 8/1/2016 This is amazing. Just amazing. I LOVED Sarah's dad's reaction to Jareth. "I knew I should've brought a gun." I literally cracked up when I read that line. |
| LadyLivMartar chapter 4 . 7/20/2016 I'm OBSESSED with this story ️️️️ |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/29/2016 Very interesting :3 |
| mulberryjam chapter 4 . 1/28/2016 "It was time to make pies." the best ending line I have ever read. I enjoyed this very much. |
| Grymmarie chapter 4 . 8/19/2015 This was an amazing story! I loved it! |
| Little Free Eagle chapter 1 . 7/19/2015 Loved it! I can't wait to see what u have in store. Please update soon! |
| vampsydney chapter 4 . 7/13/2015 I absolutely loved your story! The dynamic between Sarah and Jareth was fantastic and kept me entranced with the story. |
| just me 5000 chapter 4 . 6/30/2015 Lovely story. Reading it made me forget my wretched day and gave me the warm fuzzies. Thanks! |
