| Reviews for Hiccup and the Dragon Riders |
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   izy440 chapter 4 . 7/23/2019 Is this going to have Hiccup x Astrid or will it have Hiccup x oc. I like the stories with Hiccup running away, but the only thing I do not like is they still have him in love with Astrid. I feel that with him leaving and meeting new people he would have moved on. Also the time away from Berk I think he would focus more on the negative than positive. I mean while Astrid never bullied him she did not stand up from him either and I think he would remember that. I can understand if it was after his flight as she shows him he can change but not before it. |
| Mariah chapter 3 . 10/28/2018 wow I am guessing Gem is hiccup's future bride? also I love hiccup X OC stories myself. will Gem's father confront her and tell her he loves her like sky? |
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/5/2017 Shame this is a Hiccup x OC, I would have liked to read the rest of this story, but will not now. |
| mc arno chapter 2 . 1/5/2017 Super chapitre ça promet une fanfiction génial, j'ai hâte de lire la suite, aller à la prochaine! |
| Polarek chapter 2 . 1/5/2017 You say English isn't your first language and you have dyslexia and yet you write better than about half the people who write fics eventhough their first language is English so well done |
| Dark Ghost coc chapter 1 . 2/2/2016 Great start bro! But I got a question. Will hiccup go back to berk or..? |
| Rorscharch chapter 3 . 1/31/2016 i like it alot |
| Racgirl chapter 2 . 3/15/2015 Try to correct your spelling but apart from that this story is really good! P.s don't make it too long |
| Silverserpent74 chapter 2 . 2/9/2015 It's a good start to the story however the grammar often made it hard to read and I found myself loosing focus I know you have probably heard Something similar to this a few times so my suggestion is to get a proofreader to look at you work before uploading it. And I wish you good luck. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/22/2015 You should update update update update update |
| DauterFeralVigilanteDragonLady chapter 2 . 12/20/2014 Will you continue it? |
| Lala2010 chapter 2 . 9/22/2014 This is a good story one that should be continued |
| marauding lemur chapter 2 . 9/16/2014 we need an update for this story, it's off to such a great start. come on. |
| SkySorrow chapter 2 . 8/20/2014 I think you have the right layout and potential for a very grand story but you are trying to pack to much information in one go without enough going into enough detail of the characters or their surroundings. Still it is a very good start and i shall follow it with interest. SS |
| xlight02 chapter 1 . 8/10/2014 when is chapter 3 coming out? |
