| Reviews for Holding On |
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Scoundrel73 chapter 14 . 4/10 What happens next? |
Mauraslover chapter 14 . 11/9/2018 Is there more to this story? |
penny.robinette.90 chapter 14 . 11/1/2018 just found this story. hope that you will continue with it soon! |
Guest chapter 14 . 10/31/2018 It is very nice to read your story.i like the way you write with feeling and eye for details and senses. Thank you and I do hope the next chapter will follow soon. |
Corinne Sleuth chapter 14 . 1/31/2018 Was hoping there was going to be a sequel to this story. It was fantastic, you had me looking forward to the next chapter. Please make a sequel. Great job. |
Soccer lady chapter 14 . 9/24/2017 04: 48 nuit blanche...couldn't stop reading. Thank you , just wow. Where is the final? :)) |
ilze12 chapter 14 . 9/20/2017 Are you ever going to finish this? It's quite aggravating getting invested in a story, only to be left hanging. Please do finish this one. |
Soccer lady chapter 14 . 9/17/2017 i just finished reading until the last chapter. I simply love the way you write these characters. The love Jane and Maura feel for each other is palpable. I'm glad i ' ve read this and hope for a new update. |
FrumiousBandersnatch15 chapter 14 . 4/11/2017 Ooooooo! This is too good not to update! Please please please come back:) |
Zebrastreifen chapter 14 . 3/15/2017 Please tell me you're planning on continuing this! |
rayzerup chapter 14 . 12/5/2016 Please freakin update! lol I love this! |
lalalalee chapter 14 . 11/14/2016 would love to see this continued but as they say... life gets in the way. i hope you're well. |
Jupiter chapter 14 . 9/21/2016 This story is just brilliant! There's so much more to tell. I want to know more about the boy's death - a fantastic original crime by the way, cos there are so many stories which link in those from the TV series. I want to see Jane kiss Ricky and realise she feels nothing compared to Maura's lips. I want to see a jealous Maura blurt out her feelings for Jane. I want to hear what Jane said or did to Giovanni that caused her grin. There is so so so so much more to tell. I love the way you write and the dialogue is funny and sharp. I've enjoyed it all so much and I want more, more, more - pleeeeeaassssse. I know you abandoned this story more than a year ago, but please continue and finish it off... |
AngieB628 chapter 8 . 7/26/2016 Arrrgggggg! Just tell her! |
AngieB628 chapter 7 . 7/26/2016 Another great chapter! |