Hi, I started re-reading your story a few days ago. It is probably one of the best fanfics I have ever read. I hope you decide to do a part two of your Half-breed’s life rewrite

Hello ! I just wanted to know when and if there will be a part two ? Thank you your story is pretty good

Wait, really? Well that explains a lot. I was waiting for an update to bring this back to the top of the page, where I'd read all the chapters I missed. That was, in fact, a flawed plan it seems. Better look on your profile and see if the sequel's out yet.

Cool story, WAAAAYYYYY better than the first one by far. I just wish I had a better understanding of how strong Gohan is currently. For example, when he got captured by the cooler elite force and received training from them he said he should be 3 times as strong as normal. However, when Vegeta says that he lost muscle mass from lack of training and Gohan agreed with him, I couldnt help but think"but what about all that training by Cooler's squad?" Also, it was a little repetitive a little bit with every person Gohan encounters basically tells him he cant escape no matter how good the plan he comes up with. And when he finally do escape at the end of the day he gets capture again, forced to work as a soldier again with a different squad ( I enjoyed this part), and to be turned into Frieza and the saiyans basically putting him back in square one. Then Gohan states that he gonna escape again. The last gripe I have with the story is Gohan cannot be so strong that everyone (Cooler, Freiza, the saiyans) wants him on their team, but so weak that he cannot defend himself very well. It was stated some where towards the middle where Nappa told Vegeta that while Gohan was saving Raditz that Gohan's outburst matches or was near Vegeta's maximum power. Then, as the story progresses there is seeming no development of Gohan ever closing the gap between him and Vegeta.

Finally out of the bootcamo, ino the bootcamp saga was very boring to read, although there was some interesting facts about the saiyan race.

Where is the 2nd part? I can't find it anywhere?

This was a fun ride, looking forward to the rest

I never read the original version since you said that you prefer this version better.
I look forward to reading the next installment! Thank you!

Great way to wrap up the first part of the rewrite.

So Gohan has decided to dedicate his life to bring Frieza down, this will become easier once he learns his comrades also share this ambition.

Later.

great hope the next will be up soon

love the chapter

Poor Gohan. They'll never believe him now

Did this just turn into rated M

Dude, you never stop to amaze me, your writing is phenomenal

nice hope the next will be up sooner