Ahh, this is fucking amazing! I need more. This story is amazing! And that choking thing Michael does is so hot, why don't more fics do that. I need more stories like this. You know, this is the exact reason I have many fanfiction that are barely started. i have run out of stories to read and i want more like this. So now I have to write my own, but I'll never get around to finishing it. ugh! Life sucks! ... i think i need help.

YAAAAAAAASSSSSS dis is the storyyyyy!

oh wow... it took me 2 days to read it all, but god it was worth it, every damn letter xDDDD so adorable xDD I feel 300% satisfied! is it wrong of me if I ask about season 2? xDDDD pleaseee write it too xD anyway cuteness overload. thanks~ you made my day (**)

I like the way you write Michael. It went a little broad sometimes but it was mostly spot on. Well done. Look forward to next chapter.

Oh my god, I can't wait to see how you write episode 8. Loving this fic!

Love the story and hope to see the next chapter soon.

I really hope you continue i very much enjoy your story and the way i can see their relationship developing

Love it!

Hey :) I'm just a french girl who are trying really hard to find wonderful story about Dominion and there isn't one in my language :/ So I'm sorry for the mistakes of spelling but you're my first english autor and I'm really impress by your work (even if I'm sure that I don't understand all of your talent) :D It's all for the moment... I think :p I hope that I can as soon as possible read more of Evolution :3
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lol I was literally covering my mouth while reading. I love this. The next episode needs to air cuz i need more.

Very good

Great! Love what your doing with the story so far, keep it up D Would be great to see longer chapters next time too )