Brown Indian cunt

I like this story, this has made me wanna read a story where bella travels across the shinobi world and becomes a member of the akatsuki or something.

Not a fan of this.

Bellatrix has alwas been hot and sexy,
She's got the same personality no voldemort or purebloods to cause her to be a death eater again and as a ninja she has a legitimate outlet for her more aggressive tendencies.
Harry started this Bella only seems to be reacting to his continued grudge, they could work amazingly well together and I imagine when older they could channel their passion in ways that Bella at least would appreciate far more than the fights, with the way she flirts all the time it's apparent that maybe she's incredibly frustrated and would be allot less sasistic if somone had the balls to fuck her every so often, ( she didn't try to play with kakashi she got straight to business,so I imagine she wouldn't waste time trying to get into somones head if they didn't interest her enough to make it worth the effort to do so, with her skills she could easily ambush kill harry, but she prefers to taunt him so clearly doesn't want him dead she just likes getting in his head and getting his attention.)
Unfortunately Harry's an idiot who is pointlessly holding onto a grudge that has no relavance in this new life, it will achieve nothing, and Bella won the moment he started stupidly trying to shout at her as a baby. There is no scenario in which harry wins unless he seduces her and he's too stupid to realise that his time would be better spent trying to get under her skirt than constantly failing to become a missing nin, because should she let him seriousy injure her or kill her he will become a criminal he us the bad guy there is no justification for his feeling even if the past life us taken into consideration Bella is still a loyal promising konoha shinobi who will willingly do her duty, harry on the other hand is talented and cares for his people, but he's not a proper shinobi his personal feelings and loyalties are to himself before anyone else, he's much like orochimaru in that aspect.

Really Bella should just tell him why he's being stupid and how his grudge against her is pointless and will achieve nothing, I'm sure she's aware of the fact that for all his talk he can't actually do anything to her and if she refused to fight him it would probably break him to realise that he is behaving like voldemort and would similarly be a stain on society should he actually go to far in regards to Bella. But like I said she clearly enjoys having his attention

Why? Why do you leave this greatness on hitaus? Why don't you continue it?!
This is too great of a story to just leave alone! Sure you might be stuck on how to move from here but you can do it! Just reread the story once and then try to imagine what might come next!

Or is it because Bella and Harry's stories are getting more and more diverse that you stopped writing this?

I love the image of two muderous toddlers going at it during a play date.

Thank you for this !

interesting story, i hope you will continue it

His Mastery over Earth gives him the perfect opening to learn dust techniques

Your Harry Potter must be uniquely stupid to mistake kurenai for voldemort. Don't give you characters the idiot ball, especially for pointless drama in a one-off scene.

It's ok. Not fantastic tho.

Too cracky to actually be a good story.

This is a fascinating story idea, but I need more! Also, Bella is way too much of a psychopath to get away with all this violence... I know that some of Konoha would like to use her as a weapon, but I'm pretty sure that most people would object to how she handled the bandits.

Er, where did Harry actually call her "Bella"?

This is great. I hope you continue it. I really want to see what happens next on the wave mission, and Hiruzen's reaction when Kakashi reports what Bella did.

Its one of those great stories; I wish there was more but It says this chapter went up 3 months ago...

I really hope more will come but I understand you probably moved on.

Awesome hope you update soon.