Well I'm glad that this story is taking a more vanilla approach on the big sisters, cause I would have saved them if it was cannon. Also, I'm quite amused by the interactions between Delta and Eleanor.

Great job making this prologue mate. I am Bio-Shocked by how well written it is! Shame that I only discovered this amazing story now.

Also, you should definitely cross-post this on other sites to gain more recognition. You truly deserve more followers mate!

SpacebattlesForum and Sufficient Velocity are great sites to post stories like this!

As someone who loves historical warships, Johnny better get his Fletcher back or I'll be disappointed.

Nice chapter! This is going swimmingly. Your story actually got me into bioshock 2...and i beat the game. So i can't wait for what comes next,haha

Nice to see this updated, it's been a while since I read this but I still remember enough to follow what's happening. And Delta saved Meltzer! I'm glad, that's something I'd wished for in canon. Not sure how well a baseline human will be able to keep up with a pair of Big Daddy but I'm curious to see.

Delta's choice of loadout is interesting too, without game mechanics a lot of the more popular Plasmids probably do have major drawbacks if you're not careful with them, fire especially.

Amazing chapter. It is an interesting choice to use insect swarm as one of Delta's Plasmids I never used it when I played Bioshock 2 I was always more of an Electro Bolt and Winter Blast type of person Plus the upgraded Security Command so I could summon Security Bots or Elite Security Bots. Add in the Handyman Tonic and you get Bots that will never die and They each come with a name. So maybe give this Delta Security Command because there is no such thing as over kill when it comes to Splicers.

this is an awesome fanfic and im glad i happened across it i cant wait to see what you come up with in the upcoming chapters and as others have said take all the time you need and glad to see theres others out there who still thinking about and like bioshock 2

Glad to see this is still being updated and no worries real life is way more important , good luck with your test

Take all the time you need dude, Your story is one of the best.

I, for one, thank you for your kind words, and hope to see the next chapter of this story, I'm a big fan and love how your subtly using the "quantum nexus" under the guise of "genetic memory" in a scant few places, one example being the "city in the sky" question from the little sister last chapter, again, thank you for the kind words to us all that read your story and I can't wait to see what you pull off next

By him on terra, keep safe.

Keep safe man, these are some hard times, but it's great to see this is still being updated even when it seems like the entire world is at a stand still.

i forgot to specify bioshock 2 is your favorite in the bioshock series, not amongst your collection of games.

dear writer, i Appreciate you on so many levels. reading your stories has taught me something, there is a certain sub-genre of gamers who love the same games, because i thought it was a miracle at first when i stumbled across you with Bioshock, dead space, and fear. and even more amazed when bioshock 2 was your favorite, because its not common opinion, but thats when i realized, a certain few, like us, were put on the same track when playing games, and ended up with the same opinions, it really makes me happy knowing there are other people who have the same exact interests.

You should probably wait to write sigmas story out until your done with this one considering how close you are to the end.

Honestly this story was a great way to sit back and kill time esspecially during bioshocks loading screens.

You do use delta breaking his ribs or coughing up blood a bit too much duding combat scenes, im suprised delta can still see out his porthole with all the blood on it. Also it's not a ferris wheel, its a carousel in Dionysus.