It was good, but I wish Mary wasn't given such a bad rap even by association here. Do all of Sherlock's friends really think so little of her – and John?

A good story

I like your theory. I've always thought they keep in touch with each other re: danger nights, missing in action, etc. Happy to know I was not the only one who suspected. Greg feels (And yes I know Sherlock would scowl at this point!) a lot more than he lets on for the Holmes Brothers. Enjoy your writing immensely. Am looking over your collection as soon as I send this off. Thank you for the stories.

I really love the way you get inside the character's heads! One bit of concrit: the story might flow a bit better if not all of the non-dialogue sentences were their own paragraphs.