all I can honestly say after reading this is WOW. you have captured them perfectly and I was at the edge of my seat reading this fan fiction the entire time. thank you for writing such a masterpiece that managed to shatter and put my heart back together in only 23 chapters.

Healy and his crusades :

This is definitely one of my favorite stories.

Man, Piper is such a narcissist air head at times. Very insecure, and Healy. s a perverted sack of shit.

Leave it to Healy, he's nothing but a Shit disturbing homophobic.

Loving thestory. I've read it once before but have to refresh my memory.

a great story, I loved it, just enough angst and laughs, a happy ending.

My favorite is Behind Closed Doors and second favorite is Lockdown

Love this story. This is the second time I've read it. It was a fewonths ago that I read it the first time and many parts I had forgotten.

Muchas gracias por escribir esta historia. es el primer fanfic de oitnb que leo. y me encanto. hubo un capitulo que tuve que dejar de leerlo porque lloraba sin parar. Felicitaciones... Tu escritura fue facil, amena e interesante. Saludos...

You've wisely handled your personal Alex/Piper story, my absolute congratulations. But I would have liked more smut and less drama because you have taken to the extreme the drama that I personally don't like. Lesbian stories on TV are going too far in drama. That's not necessary.

I cried! Thank you for such an amazing story!

Your story has agitated me, because my father had a bad heart. He underwent 4 bypass and a pacemaker in his last years of his life and I know well the hours in hospitals. I love Orange is the new black and as an occasional writer that I am, I value your way of tracing this story, of capturing the characters out of their context in OITNB but being faithful to the context. My language is not English, so forgive me if there are mistakes. My father had a bad heart. He underwent 4 bypass and a pacemaker in his last years of his life and I know well the hours in hospitals. I wrote a FanFic for LostGirl years ago s/9277174/1/Mar in Spanish and I am very proud of the writing process because everything was visual, I saw everything and my mind translated it into words. Good job in this history!

This is the best fiction ever great use of the lines in the real show .. lovved it

Woah! The plot was not surprising, and the final expected and easy. But I really really liked your story, it was truly beautiful.