That is my favorite story! I like it sooooo much, you have no idea! I love it and it's exactly as I dream about them: oh, Jane and his dirty talk - priceless!
I would say it's one of your best stories!
You are great, Rothelena! You are brave and I'm really glad that I discovered you and your wonderful dreams

Oh so sweet thanks for a very good read

Just read your author's note for the first chapter (long one!). Sounds like whoever wrote that flame needs to get a life & just not read your M stories. I don't write flames on stories I don't like; I simply don't read them.
As for the characters being OOC & the sex unrealistic, so what? That's fantasy. And if the stories are well-written (like yours are), that's what matters.
Besides, when I'm in the mood for it, I look for smut;). Mentalist porn hehehe:D.

soooo good!

Hey! Before I got an account I used to review as Alva. Just saying!
Omg! This was completely awesome! Ur so lucky to dream of those two on a daily basis! I wish I could but nope.. Still just kiddies dreams for me. Ugh...
And I love your response to the hating comments, I support everything you wrote frol start to end!

Omg that was sexy as hell & there was nothing dirty about it! You're my FAVOURITE Jisbon FF writer BECAUSE you're not afraid to go there! I need more!

Very well written. And to comment on ur introduction: completely unnecessary! because u always warn about what kind of story u write, so if there still are complaints they are just too dumb to read! And P *** is something else entirely! And about mistakes in the language...meeh...even the native writers make mistakes, so... tz!
I like ur stories and i hope there are more! and i'm soo looking forward to season 7 .

Humm. Very nice. Great job! Not overly dirty - sex is messy and thats half the fun - giving up control. I read ur note and think u should keep all comments because despite others ridicule ur writing will keep making more ppl happy than upset. Ur resilliant and it shouldnt bother u so much - Im sorry u had such negative nancys ruin ur fun. I hope u keep writing : )

All the best,
Sugar

Great story! I really enjoyed it!

Well, I loved this story, The reason they put rated M on this type of story is if you are not interested in reading about a lot of sexual action; then you don't read it. It's not 'rocket science' it's not hard, sorry, I had to run with the pun. If you don't want to see an rated x movie due to sex you don't have the right, or good taste to go and watch said movie, and then yell at the world and shake your fist, or pen and say that this is lewd, and horrible, and I am shocked that you (the writer) had the nerve to write this trash. So, read up dear readers, if you don't want to read about sex, then don't. That's why we have guidelines.

Please write some more! Please write your Jisbon dream!

Just ignore these conservative prude people who hate your stories. I think someone who complains about your fics is just ashamed because he/she gets turned on in secret and doesn't wanna admit it. I like your fics and your writing style and I'm not embarrassed to say that I do get (slightely) turned on by this. Good work and tell us more about your jisbon-dreams!

I love your fantasies! True love with thrust comes true passion ( lust but not only that) which means both partner can let go and really share with each other, not strangers for one night stand, what really flip their switch and FEELINGS! I really enjoy your stories and writing style. And I love it when you make Jane and Lisbon talk while making love . I would like to thank you for being generous and share your talent for our enjoyment. So please don"t let a few bad words bring you down and your stories may be "out of this world" and maybe that's why we like them! No right, no wrong, just Jane and Lisbon being and loving.

It was wonderful. I adore your writings and eagerly await the next ones. _.

Jane's talk to Teresa is the dirtiest and hottest that it has been given me to read so far! wow this one-shot was so torrid! well done! loved it! I can't wait for your next fanfic, like usually!