Whyyyyyyy what did you do to Percy he loves Annabeth?

pls keep going this is soo good

So good why are you stopping? I hate this

sooo good

Spoke too soon with that last review... oops.
I respect your decision to discontinue the story, but I don't think that you should stop writing just because you may not be the best of the writers. None of my own stories are good at all, but for months I've been rewriting scene after scene to improve everything I've ever written. Like that, I hope that you continue to write and improve your grammar and style.
(Hopefully) happy writing!

Cute :) I'm just really glad you didn't leave me hanging. lol

You need to make every piece of dialog in quotations a new paragraph, but other wise, the grammar is pretty good. Only two more chapters to go and I'm scared it's going to end abruptly XD

I think the story is coming along nicely, while yes there are grammer and spelling issues, but they're minor. Everyone makes mistakes, keep it up.

I have always wondered why people give Rachel, this dort of persona?

dude i love this story but plz PLZ back off with the amanda thing and maybe turn out her evil thing cause i love percabeth and btw i love the charector you made for anabeth and for percy and rachel etc. plz post soon and maybe add some lemons ;)

PERCABETH! PERCABETH! PERCABETH! OTP! OTP! OTP! (What I, a Percabeth fan would do. TAKE OUT BANNERS OF PERCABETH.)

I love the love triangle...VERY CREATIVE! :)

Great story! I love the charictors I couldent stop reading! Hope you post more soon!

I NEED TO FIND THE AMANDA SECRET

Aww I love Rachel. But love this chapter