| Reviews for One More Scar |
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   Queen Vissy chapter 1 . 8/1/2018 This was beautiful, but the formatting needs some work. Also, a little more explanation at the end, please! I’ve read some of your other stories and you do really well writing depressing things. I’m not sure if that’s a good or a bad thing! Good luck |
| xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 1 . 12/22/2017 Poor Harry... |
| RiddleRose13 chapter 1 . 10/17/2016 Oh this is absolutely beautiful! Thank you so much! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2016 This looks interesting, but the formatting is a mess. You might want to double-check and make sure this story is showing up properly. |
| Forest Edyne chapter 1 . 6/3/2016 AWWW cute but sad. Poor Harry. Please continue, this story has a lot of potential. I look forward to another installment. |
| PaC chapter 1 . 7/20/2014 I disagree with the review to continue. Keep it a one-shot. It's fine. The some scars mixed with a rope burn though, is a WTF moment, regarding the ending about some scars are GOOD. If there is much meaning to what the meaning of that is. You might want to give more hints, because the last line one can make up some example where maybe that line might apply. BUT as the final line here, I don't have a clue. Funny, but reminds me of canon, and Dumbles WAS WRONG, telling McGonagal how Harry having the curse scar ... blah blah the map of London underground scar on Dumbles leg. Well, just think of how later, how much Harry hates the scar, known by it, everyone looking at it, not to mention Draco's oh so clever "scar head" taunts. Can't believe how lame they did it in the movies, like a fine point red felt tip marker, and a wide letter "Z" not much like a lightning bolt lol. Then again, they didn't use contacts or easy to do green eye coloring in processing the final cut. So NO green eyes. And please, famous actress or NOT, casting ON LOOKS was important as hell for Fleur. Might as well have just stuck one of the actresses playing one of Hogwarts students into the role and not paid for a casting. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2014 A sad but moving story and I would like it if you did a part two to this please ! The Crimson Mage. |
| The-Girl-Who-Dreamed chapter 1 . 7/4/2014 Brilliant! This would be even better it it was multi-chapter *hint, hint.* |
| The Seven of Us chapter 1 . 7/3/2014 This is really good. I can't say much else other than that... Made me choke up a bit... -Percy |
