lol while valka is scolding her son hiccup both of them heard astrid smirking at her boyfriend hey my dragon boy leave me out of it

I was puzzled but carried on anyway because it was so entertaining to read and once I got to the end the lightbulb of recognition and understanding blinked on in my head (I think I'm so funny ha) anyway! Cute story. Thought it was adorable and looooved the dialogue.

this is 1 of best and funniest stories that I have read

At first I was confused. Then I ignored the confusion because Hiccup was being adorable. Then at the end - Aaaaaaaawh! Poor Hiccup!

Awwww, I love the ending, although the summary did scare me a little:)

Cute. Sweet. My heart is aching. You've done well young writer. Especially loved the light-bulb idea.

I loved this one, specially the "But... Science!" part.
And you made them so cute! w
... And we've been wrong about electricity all this time. Figures.

Don't give up, Hiccup! :3

Keep writing!

I LOVED THIS!

Haha.

*sigh* whispers, "so cute."

Aaaaaaaaaaaw! Tis humorous, and then it turned sweet!

NEED SECOND PART!

Aww! So cute.

OMG

Whoa, so we've been wrong about Edison this entire time? Not that I'm surprised. Cute plan though, Hiccup.