| Reviews for Muldoon |
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Redbird chapter 27 . 6/8 This is so amazing and brilliant! I had read this back before the T-Rex was killed so I was over the moon to see there were more chapters and I absolutely adore it so much! It's so intricate and I love Muldoon and Priscilla's bond. Was the plane flying over Alan Grant going to Isla Sorna? Excited to see the lil baby raptors and oof will Wu and the others accidentally find Evie, Tembra and Clarice! |
Marjorie Nescio chapter 27 . 3/8 I wonder what Muldoon's demands will be like and whether Wu and his men will meet Temba & family. |
Brachydios1021 chapter 27 . 2/5 Can already tell Muldoon will probably use this to get him and Priscilla off the island heck maybe he will be involved In fallen kingdom also absolutely loving this story |
CP-Writings chapter 27 . 2/5 Aw snap! I've been waiting for this chapter. Now I'm gonna have to wait for the next. Honestly, I was expecting dinosaur hunters to show up, I was not expecting Wu to return, but that makes more sense. So what will Wu do! I gotta know! SO EXCITED! |
MadManWithAHat chapter 27 . 2/4 Thanks for the chapter! |
7sky chapter 27 . 2/4 ooooh, this ought to be entertaining. |
Zerousy chapter 26 . 10/14/2019 I feel like the peace for him and Pracilla isn't going to last long |
Leviathan54 chapter 26 . 10/12/2019 Great to see another chapter :) I do like the peaceful moments between Priscilla and Muldoon and it's nice to see how their bond flourish. I thought the leave of other raptors would be more dramatic but I guess it made sense. The hormone storm made it happen quicker. Once they figured out they can't rely on him during the hunt, they walked away. I hope we will see Evie one day and I'm curious what mateship dynamics work in raptor packs. I wonder if Priscilla would go through her own hormones storm soon. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter :) |
Theresa F chapter 26 . 10/9/2019 Thumbs up, very visually beautiful chapter! |
GrumpyFox chapter 26 . 10/8/2019 I can picture this, such an amazing image! I sincerely wish I was an arrest because this chapter, the ending especially deserves to be portrayed as a picture. As always, I love your work and enjoy your updates. You're amazing and a delight! |
MadManWithAHat chapter 26 . 10/7/2019 Thanks for the chapter! |
ijnfleetadmiral chapter 26 . 10/7/2019 Nice chapter...wonder if the story will end with Muldoon leaving the island and going back to life in Africa, with Priscilla going with him. Be interesting to see if they meet Muldoon's ex, and the first time she gets belligerent with him Priscilla kindly lets her know that that's not allowed...in her own special raptor way, of course. XDDD |
Theresa F chapter 25 . 9/14/2019 So happy to read a new chapter! Will wait patiently for when you write a new another! |
GrumpyFox chapter 25 . 9/10/2019 More scars to tell the ever growing story of man and raptor! Love the story as always, and can't wait to read more to find out what comes next! |
Leviathan54 chapter 25 . 9/10/2019 Hello, What a chapter! I see Muldoon and raptors crossed Rubikon during Temba and Priscilla fight. I wonder what Temba really thought looking into Muldoon's eyes. Was she conflicted a bit or did try to weight odds in taking a fight with him. Maybe she attacked Priscilla because of jealousy. The next chapter will confirm if there is any bond between them left. I liked Evie was a peacemaker in the pack defusing an extremely tense situation where one wrong twitch and Temba would be killed. I see Evie still sees the man as a companion at least. Hmm... I'm really curious what would you do with the pack. I see he would let them go the next day, probably he could leave with Priscilla for some time to see if they would be still there. On the other hand he doesn't want the pack to claim his bunker as part of their territory (he has supplies there etc). Maybe Temba would tell other raptors to come with her and that would be the parting ways. Evie would be so conflicted. Priscilla is a bit silly (you don't poke bigger raptors) but precious girl ;) I hope Muldoon realises how much she helps him to keep his sanity in check and makes living on the Island bearable. If something bad happened, she would have his back despite her injury. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter :) |