I must have read this when you first put it up - I can remember printing it out when I still printed out everything Alias - and I came back because I remembered loving it.

No longer canon compliant, but now it is a beautiful AU written in a wonderful Childs voice.

So it's 2008, six years after this was published, and we're sitting down talking about Alias and fanfic. We were discussing our old favorites, and the only one that we both instantly agreed on as the best was this one. So we're just dropping a review to say Well Done. Well done! It was so good.

This was freakish kinds of good... i have to ask though... was Miss. D Syd or was it C-2 and C-24 was vaughn.( I dunno if I even got the numbers of the ones I was thinking of right.) Or was it a bunch of made up characters?
-Missy

I really enjoyed this story.

Your first person sounded convincing as a child, and she seemed to have the right level of understanding of what was going on.

(I sent you some e-mail, with some other stuff that doesn't really affect the story line.)

Lots of fun. I'll have to go read another one now!

I can't really say enough good things about this piece. I'm captivated. Companion piece! Companion piece! Companion piece! *cheers like mad*

WOW! awesome end...this IS the end, right?

i would love to read a sequel; maybe Syd and Anna somehow remember the time they spent together as kids? that would be very cool.

obviously, miss d. is irina. so is anna going on to be an agent irina's organization? will she ever find out that her friend from camp is miss. d.'s daughter? and if you could do a companion piece to this, about what happens to anna in the future, that would be cool.

Wow! I didn't expect the girl to be Anna - I thought it was Syd! Great job; well written.

That was very good. I am quite curious about who Anna's parent's are, but I will get over that if you never tell me. It's always nice to go through life thinking about things, and this is one of the things i can ponderwhen i get bored. I would very much like to see a sequel to this, or a companion piece, but again, I will get over it if that never happens. I understand how hard it can be to write such an amazing story, and then try to somehow write another part, just when you thought that it was perfect, and finished. Hope that you will write more excellent stories like this one, but I probably won't read them. I find that most of the stories here are about the second season, and here in aust we haven't seen it, and won't see it for awhile. The only reason i still come to this part, is to read this story, which would have to be one of my favourite Alias fics ever. Hope that you liked what you have written, because I know that i certainely did.

Good story. It isn't very clear at some points though. It would be freaky to be one of the kids.

Oh my flippin Eru! Holy mother of Harry Potter! and every other way there is to say Wow! This story is SOOOOO good! And hello to the major twist there at the end. I have the great-story goosebumps. All over. Delicious work you've done here. Simply huge. Wow. *shiver* JJ should hire you!

*gulps* Devlin, and now Derevko ? O Waw, that *was* unexpected... I really love all your twists. The original idea was just great, and the way you introduce all those characters make it even better )

Still love the childish style... And the comment Anna makes about learning languages fast because they seemed familiar was very powerful IMHO. The whole fic is powerful, actually... It is one of those work that make the reader 'feel' the writer's intelligence )

I'd love to see a companion piece to that... Please ?

Congratulations on the good work !

Anna! O, it makes so much sense. And Syd and Vaughn being there! Wow, this is sooo cool!

definately not what i expected. why you said 'anna', you meant 'anna espinosa' right? B/c thats wahat i thought it meant. might have just been mistaken. That was a great fic, very well written, and it was obvious that you put a lot of effort into it. Congrats on a success!

WOW

wow wow wow wow wow wow

unbelievable

more please!