again, this was so good! I actually found the previous version of this after i read this one, and i'm so happy i read this first, i adore the changes you made. I actually found Yaten chapter the most cute of all, i actually think that if she told him she was pregnant from before he would still accept her; i love M/K but i do have sigh of me that found mina and yaten cute, and idk. I'm so sad you hadn't post anything more :(

I only just found this story and I love it. I am thoroughly disappointed that you haven't written anymore in 11 years. *sigh* All the good stories are never finished. Please come back and continue.

interesting

Poor Usagi. Mamoru is an ass. Hope you choose to begin this again although its been a few years so I won't be holding my breath.

I really enjoyed the story. it was we'll written and seemed like it was going somewhere. a few too many pregnancies though. and I feel too rushed an intro for some characters. good work overall. I hope you keep at it.

I like the pace of the story; it's very slow, but at the same time, there are many other stories that flow together. Please update soon! I would like to read more, because this is quite well written.

Shit! This is so good.

Please update this.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I've probably already bothered you with a review, but I can't get this story off of my mind! It's just-so-freaking-AWESOME! I really can't stop thinking of it and how you're tearing me to shreds with this last chapter! In case you couldn't tell, I really love this story. I love how you've twisted the plot, and how Mamoru and Usagi's relationship has been thrown together. Really good jumping point for really good stuff! I'm laughing inside and squealing with excitement at all of the possibilities, and ...I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY! :) :_) Help me get over this fit of the giggles and publish the next installation soon...I'll be rather disappointed if it doesn't have U&M in it, but you're working your way towards it, and you have yet to add several important characters, so...I'll just have to wait in agony. Pooh. Good luck! I'm really excited about this story, but you probably already know that, don't you :P!

~ Sarah M.

This story is geat! I love it! It's very well written and this is one of the only stories I have read that have hu eavy sex scenes (besides redemption; that is awesome too). I just want you to know what an amazying author I think you are. Keep writing. You rock!

Holy Kami! I read this a long time ago when there were only the first three chapters and by the date on it, I didn't think that you would ever update. I was surprised to see a new chapter, but I am completely in love with this story! Your story structure is extremely well thought out and I'm anxious to see where you are going with this. I hope to see more up soon! Please keep up the absolutely stunning work!

I can't even begin to explain why I liked this story..

Soo I will just say that I really really hope that you're not thinking about giving it up on this one!

I really would like to read more!

This is my favorite Sailor Moon fanfiction of all times, and the only one I follow after about 3 years. I found up to quite a few chapters, but I was wondering if you have the finish version lying about anywhere. It is so unbelieveably good, and I'm so anxious to know the ending. Anyway, please email me back at boitenvalise Thanks.

Awesome! when I read the reviews that there were other chapters of this fic, I found them and read them all in an afternoon ( considering that this is my last week of my senior year in college, and have to write a 10 page essay to give in 2 days) i just had to take the time and read all of it, since it was so good, and well written.

It will be even better with the new revision, but I must say that the other version was just as good, and wish you could continue from chapter 11.

none the less, keep up the good work! this fic is amazing!

Thank you so much for updating this story. I really hope you'll be able to make it all the way through with the story this time. I enjoyed all the other versions, too, but this one is definitely flowing better. Good luck with it!