Aww, that was so sweet! I really enjoyed the moment Hiruma convinced Sena not to call him Hiruma-san (the "Hiruma-sama" and following comment on their allegedly kinky relationship made me laugh so much, thanks!)

I don't think his moral compass if malfunctioning, it just points to whatever he wants most ;) thumbs up for pirates of the carribean XD

This is so good! It's been a while since I was in this fandom but it looks as though it's only gotten better. Hiruma was hilarious, does he strike you as the type to be totally oblivious to others having romantic interest in him? Because it does to me, because of his reputation he'd never take something like that into account right. He just thinks everyone's scared of him and wants him out of their business. He'd neve for a second pick up on someone actually having feelings for him. Like with Sena, that was cute. He had no idea.

I'm liking this so far n.n don't really see anything going on between Monta and Sena, consider them just really good friends, but it's different. Reading the rest of it now n.n

Love love love and a lot of little Angel all over my head

For a minute there I thought he would bribe Mamori with cream puffs. Lol. Nice story.

kyaaaaahhhh!
total awesomeness!
loved it

It' already the end?... awww I wamted more! But anyway, thank you very much for writing amd completing such an awesome story! _

love it!
can't wait

Following your story because I really enjoy reading it. Keep it up :)

Awww 3 This is both really cute and surprisingly realistic. I like how you've expanded on Hiruma's backstory; it actually feels like an expansion to his character, rather than something tacked on like a lot of fanfic backstories are. It's both thoughtful and surprising, and it really sets this fic apart from others. It also goes well with the Hiruma POV you've got going here, which sounds more like him than any other I've ever read. It's great. :)
That being said, I think my favorite part of this fic is how organically all the relationships are developing. I love SenaxEveryone fics, but they usually exaggerate things to the extend of being off-putting, or entertaining but not believable. This fic has kept everyone pretty well in character, and I look forward to reading more. Good job!

Oh sweet fudge cakes! So cute! I will die from the cuteness overload! I was neutral about this pairing before but now, you made it one of my top pairings! I will seriously die by the end of this! No joke! This story just gets better and better by the chapter!

The omake is so cute and funny at the same time! This chapter was nice :)

Ahhhh the end! When he said That Sena was his! Oh god that got me! A bullet/arrow straight through the heart! So cute! And how Hiruma is well, Hiruma is just so funny and so cool! You did justice!

Oh my gosh! This story is just so amazing! You made my heart sing and scream at the cuteness and awesomeness of this story! Amazing work! And it's just the first chapter! You are so pro

Amazing :3 I love it (: