That she never writes again I will never know if katsumi and her actually get together if he got mad that she was a clone what could possibly go wrong for her now in the future and will she save her best friend from the clutches of orochimaru

TToTT

when... I can't stand this, are you ever going to update I guess you've dropped the story by now that's sad to say.
please don't tell me you died that would be even worse.!

So did you get the job are you good

me encantaría que la emparejaras con jiraya, sería genial.

I would love to see a kisame pairing for once. I love this story, and they could have great chemistry. Add to that, his status as a missing nin could make things interesting. Though I hope this story doesn't get to deep with conflicted live interests and focuses more on her development and relationship with naruto

Your writing is excellent! Sometimes I get a bit confused about where you’re heading with the plot, but it all makes sense eventually. Just like GRRMs writing style. Sometimes you write about how she gets fangs, so does that mean she absorbed some of Kurama’s chakra? Also, is she hiding from Jiraiya because she’s upset about the training accident? I am so excited to hear from you and see how the story continues with the next update. Thanks for writing this 3

This story is just pure amazingness! I really wish you continue updating this story one day. It's by far one of the best Naruto stories on this website.

Author san come back we miss you.
Please, (puppy dog eyed)

Welp, I’ve just binge read this and am interested for more so please continue! (Or at least say when it’s discontinued). I’m gonna guess that her nature chakra is super strong because she has a really high affinity with all of them and that might be also affected by the dense, saturated chakra? I really like her dynamic with all the characters and as far as relationships go I’m an immediate Kakashi fan but I think I’ve been tempted to ‘vote’ for Jiraiya ... please continue!

I flailed when I saw your response to my question and comments! Thank you so much :D Is she going to write any Friend-fiction? :) That would be pretty funny. Will she pick up any new techniques from the places they'll be visiting? Does Tsunade have any plans for her ninja-wise when she comes back next year? I'd laugh if there was just like a line up of ninjas wanting to fight her after Gai.

This is such a well-developed story! I’m so glad I found it. I started reading it not even a day ago and could not put it down. I made Siri read it to me while I drove. I also made her read it to me at my job. I’m obsessed! I honestly don’t care who she ends up with in the long run, I just want to read your writing style. Heck, even though I’m not a huge fan of Supernatural, the 11 seasons I watched will come in handy when checking out your other stories. Whew have a great day

Your story is so under-appreciated! It's really a masterpiece. I really like Kumori. Her character is very realistic. I really can't decide which paring I like the most. I'm always up for a KakashixOc but I like the relationship Kumori has with Jiraiya! I also like the steamy scenes with Kisame!
Keep it up you are doing a really good job!

the description definitely fits kakashi very well. you could say that he's my fav char in naruto and no matter how many kakashiXoc story that I've read, it will never be enough so I wish kumorixkakashi will be the endgame

I can't wait for the next update. It'll be hilarious when they realize that Kisame never had the real Kumori!

Right so...Kakashi for main pairing. They've both been through some things and I think they can help each other both heal and move on. I also vote for Gai and Jariaya to be more platonic, taking up places in her heart much like Naruto and Antonia have.

Onto the review! So I love this story. I like how realistic it is to finding yourself in another universe with no way to get back to where you came from. I'm very curious to see how she continues to grow through the story and so on. Good job!

Also the fire makes sense. Yes those from our world might have a natural affinity to all elements, but I can't be the only one that's noticed that she has a special connection to water right? The rain, thunderstorms, etc and their relation to her moods/thoughts just scream out to me.

I have finally caught up to you. Took me two days but you writing is fabulous and I enjoyed every minute of it. I noticed that everyone is rooting for Kakashi and don’t get me wrong he is amazing but I really like the Jiraiya relationship. The ground work is setup and especially with how worried and stressed out he is on the situation it wouldn’t be farfetch for Jiraiya to have caught the feels (especially after the saucy sex edu class he gave her - thats enough to make any guy see a woman in a new light and her recent lack of suitors - got to be Jiraiya giving off the stay away she’s mine vibe). He said it himself he doesn’t like to share! Can’t wait to see the reunion! Also if you do decide to put her with someone else please at least give a nice saucy Jiraiya scene to sate the imagination... the sexual tension is totally there and with her sexual taste the all mighty super pervert and critically acclaimed pornography writer would definitely rise to the occasion _ hehe!.