Too bad this is abandoned, it was a good story.

Nice job with this story so far I can’t wait to read the next chapter

This is meh tbh it’s kills all suspense that yautja stories have with naruto just doing whatever anyone wants. Predators do NOT remove their masks for anyone unless it’s that thing is an equal or better than them. The yautja lore of this story just sucks

I realize this will probably never be seen and it’s still good but the yautja seems off compared to most fics, they usually are very gruff strong warrior types not the ones to coddle a child abused or not just seems kind of off.

Fuck Yeah! Shut the FUCK up Sakura! ... I really enjoyed reading that bit.

I did enjoy the references to Futurama.

when's the next chapter?

very unique and enjoyable story :)

like this story and hope that you may update it in the future

I liked the chapter!1

Thw story is good so far. the only problem I have with it is that Naruto keeps repeating his reasoning for not living in the village. I understand when he says it to people that don't know but he told the third hokage like 10 times on why he wont join.

uh...OK so I haven't read this yet but i gotta ask, is all these comments from the same annoying guest person? I get comments on a chapter and all but this is just ridiculous

Hinata with that MUTT? I am DONE with this story.

Sai MIGHT have gotten out sooner or later, depending on badly their "conditioning" took, but sasuke, yeah, he's LOONEY TUNE for the rest of his existence... "killing your best friend to get your eyes".. Hmm not a statement that's gonna get you out, or even a reason to LET you out... I just don't see it, orochimaru, would have had to spring him from the MENTAL WARD, and then, I'm not sure how many shinobi would go after a NUT CASE!

Both these idiots should have FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES seen 4 RUBBER WALLS and plenty of padding.