I have this saved and have been checking if it's been updated in the last year, but nope. No luck. Do u plan to even continue let alone finish?

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I love what you did with the characters, and the story line. I liked how Killian felt a connection to Emma even though he didn't knew who she was. So, Killian is in critical condition but strong enough that curse is still breaking? Leo remember everything and is helping Emma to remember? I'm looking forward to see what else will they need to go thru before the curse breaks for good! :D

I always thought Emma's "superpower" was a result of her true love magic. Snow definitely does not have it in canon. Look at the way Regina, Cora and Rumple can manipulate her. And Charming even fooled her about the Excalibur sword and he's terrible at lying. But Snow is a terrible liar herself so I found that line extremely funny that she has that superpower. Thanks for the laugh.

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this story, I think this is amazing, Please update soon I am dying to know what happens!

Fantastic story, very intriguing!

Love the twist that Leo remembers

Love the twist

So are the kids 18, 14 and 12? And I thought the prophecy was that Snow would have two more kids after Neal? Or was it two after Emma and I just misunderstood because she was rubbing her belly? I loved that Emma's mother was with her in the delivery room and that her father and brothers were nearby too. I am assuming Snow and Charming are their natural age (mid 40s).

So does Leo look like David or is it a different reference?

So Killian is acting like Neal's father instead of his real father. No thanks. I miss when this story was a Charming Family story instead of the Hook is the Greatest Story. I keep reading in hopes that the family will be the focus again but I keep being disappointed.

Lol at first I read that David was a blonde man who was dirty (as in unwashed). I admit I hate that expression dirty blonde instead of dark blonde because it implies that people with darker blonde hair (like myself) are less clean than brighter blondes. It is a bit offensive. Maybe you should edit it to read dark blond instead. Quick question - are David and Mary Margaret together? And can we please see David ineracting with his children, not just Killian and Mary Margaret?

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I'm on the verge of yelling at you
Why are you giving me cliff hangers/ heart pall palpitations can't wait for update
Great story

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