It was a good story. I'm guessing it's complete.

Ha! The council finally get what they deserve. They should've killed Tevos though.

Too many plot holes. Especially when you completely written out the Krogan with NO explanation!

I don't get it, how did the humans turn the asari? You gave no explanation.

You know, this 'anonymous narrator' bullshit is fucking annoying.

Area B7R...God bless the Galm Squadron.

Alright, if this is it, I can happily say I enjoyed the ride.

This story's main strength is also its biggest weakness - it's short. Devastatingly short, almost like it was written *specifically* in a recapitulation format, meant to state *what* happened, and not *how*.

However, as short as it was, it was still very good. 'Short but sweet', as it were. I enjoyed every word of it, and am glad I gave it a chance. Its length actually helped it in some regards, the length - or lack thereof - of the chapters made me want to know what happened next immediately, as it was long enough to catch my attention but short enough to make it seem like a roller coaster ride - start, stop, turn left turn right, up, down, ri -LEFT, stop.
As I said, short, but sweet.

There were a few grammatical errors here and there, but otherwise the story was pretty good. I can't help but wonder if this was an OC Humanity or something from another Canon, if the former, it is a very interesting take on Human evolution and I would love to know what makes this Humanity tick, and if the latter, I would like to see the source material, as this felt like an almost fluid replacement of one Human Alliance for another.

If you're going to continue, I wait with baited breath. If not, it was a very good show.

-PFB

The Humans became masters of the galaxy. The Reapers invaded later on but after seeing how awesome the humans were became their loyal servants. Elvis, Michael Jackson, Andrew Jackson, and Chuck Norris were found playing cards in their secret undersea underground base. After some coaxing they reluctantly took their places as the leaders of humanity as men of their level awesome deserve.

And they all lived happily ever after...

Will this story continue? I am a bit worried seeing that chapter 15 is called 'Epilogue'. Please aswer here or write a little something on your page. It would be greatly appreciated :)

what happened to the krogan?

Huh... Is it over now or do we get a treat for second 'episode' too? You kind a left the fate of Krogan and old council races open

You didn't mention what happened to the Krogan in the epilogue.

awesome ending :p

Wait, so in this the Council actual advanced beyond mass accelerators?

Wow this story is awesome keep it up