So amaxing!

Loved it. He should've taken her to meet Sophia though, since she's a fan.

I loved this story so much I hope you contiune to writing daryl fanfics in the future :)

Great story thanks for sharing

So good! Love it. It is so meaningful and heartfelt. The essence of Bethyl. They saved each other. I love that you show what they are and will always be to each other. The beauty, innocence and need to complete their missing piece is right here. Thank you

*biiig grin* I gotta say, the change in their dynamic was (undeniably HOT) interesting. I wasn't quite expecting that tone between them. Now, I totally got it when you warned us, your readers, but seeing it? *Almost* felt like they were different characters than those established by your entire fic prior to that moment.

That all said, I'm still totally enthralled.

...?!...?/...!

:D

O.O

mmmhhhhhaaahahhh!

OHMYGODWHYYY?

OMG why the hell is he leaving?! OMG! AAHHHHHHHHH!

:( *HUGE FROWNYFACE!*

OMG as if he didn't know she was falling for him! Why the hell is he okay w falling for her and LEAVING when he realizes she's...oh, shit, his past ohmygod he has to know his past will make headlines and they wll find out they ALWAYS find out and it'll ruin her omg he should have left sooner this is terrible omg what the frell was he thinking?! OMG poor Beth its gonna break my heart when she realizes he's gone :(

I still can' believe he's made love with her and THEN left. What the frell was he thinking?! OMG that selfish bastard (still love him but OMG MAN! MEN! AGH!)

*is doing the internal happydance of internal happyness while she grins and writes this* I swear I will write more when I reach the end of these chapters because I can't stop reading this.

Just one note: the randomly Capitalized words are read as such in my head and it makes me go "hmm?" Just a thing, not irritated or anything.

I'm loving this!

*BIGGESTFUCKINGSMILEOMGYAY!*

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