Interesting idea and well written.

Awesome story

Latest review and thought for chapter 24
Oh no, Rick that will just be an excuse or reason for dave to say that tou are licking off anyone who does not agree with you. And to be hoenst kill him, he knows to much and be a trouble in the future.

Review and thought for chapter 25

It is a good thing that Dave has a moral compass. And what does those initials mean? And is billy taken care off? Oh and will they armor up or something? They have a national guard posted on woodbury surely they have body armor and helmets felt behind right?

Must be the heat...i hope, and that Billy sounds bad news, he gives me a rapist vibe, especillay when he is hitting on beth, isnt beth like 16 at this time?

I want to vote of confidence on second sight, maybe delve into there idea that Rick kinda feels like he has experience in this sort of thing, of and will rick also double the wallt to twice its size? Maybe add a secondary layer of gardening on the roofs, wooden or stone walls for extra cover using rubble, wooden bridges to get easy access across buildings and reinforce or bar the first floors incase of the walkers over running the walls and they retreat to the buildings, oh and that second barrier for the main wall? Add stakes, and caltrops incase a vehicle will ram the gates

Wait what!? Gavin did not have any soldiers wit him? He is an idiot then, and what about those soldiers loyal to him? Wil they retaliate or will Rick slowly off them one by one through rifle fire and sniper shooting

Oh, oh damn, this is gonna be a complete divergence from the show, i wonder what kind of worldbuilding you will do.

Aww yeah, Michonne has shown up, she will be very very useful in clearing out the prison, as well as her kind of harnessing the walkers so she cans safely kill the walkers.

Still sad that the house did not survive, because when they need supplies they can raid the farm or the food in its basement or the medical supplies ledt behind to make room for the trailer.

Oh damn, and oohhhhh sigh, they should have set upw aening signals so that they ahve time to prepare the vehicles as barriers for close combat and get away, maybe use the RV as a platform bait and the oyhers will pick them of one by one hell use the humvee, it has a hatch

Why does Glenn and Daryl always have the devils luck in supply runs? Next thing we know is they hole up in a warehouse full of contrcution materials and then we can see a build up of a fort or something

Hmmm, since it looks like they will be staying for a time, will the group try to build a fence or something that can hold a horde? And what about gas and fuel for there generator? Siphone from the highway again?

Hmmm, will there raiders at the Bar or just walkers? And since the Trailer is coming with them, will they keep the humvee?

Awww yeah, Sophia is alive

Oh ih oh, remember that one episode in yhe highway where they discover a kit full of knifes and an axe, and that truck full of water containers? Oh, and it must be the water when that bloated walker fell down the covered up well.