I doubt you will ever see this but I’ll say it anyways. This is quite good, it does seem to be happening too quickly, Ganondorf having been Link’s enemy, but that’s really the only problem I can see as of right now. Your spelling and grammar is great, the story’s concept is interesting, your characterization is wonderful. Truly, I am enjoying this.

So what if it’s womanly?! It just means she’s not an macho who wastes her strength willpower and focus on surprising her expression of pain!

Tup realy underated

This is still the most underated LOZ Stories i have read so far

Excellent story so far.

Excellent chapter.

I read all you have of Sword in repose earlier , and enjoyed it as well, but didn't review there because.. well.. I'm reading while not feeling well tbh. Harder to think of things to say while sick , and I'm not one of many words in general.

I enjoyed that story and I am enjoying this one now as well.

Knew it, it was Ghirahim

Midna's son will be called ghirahim... I can see it now...

Jeez how many times will you be brushing against the border of the M rating

This is nothing short of breathtaking. I'm not a fan of yaoi or slash, so a genderbend ship like this is AMAZING! 11/10

Your sense of humor is perfect! *laughing so hard right now* Awesome chapter! _

This chapter made me a bit confuse, isn't the reason midna is here because of zant whom is influence by ganon magic in the game?

Interesting, granting ganondorf a different route, and replacing it a different quest, then his usual take the triforce to rule the world. Neat

All the yes

oh my gods I love the female link x ganondorf pairing but I've only found 3 including this and the other 2 were super short