Reviews for Triple Steps
Guest chapter 3 . 5/14
Thought this was a one piece system :/ drop for me
doubledamn chapter 10 . 7/24/2019
I really want to see if he can forge a bond with a Knowledge Spirit from the Alabasta Poneglyph.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/16/2019
Already wasted more points then jeehan despite advanced knowledge of the ability. Gj.
Ptitkactus chapter 2 . 3/29/2018
Hi, is this story one where the mc have no control in his life because of a overmind puppet master(gaia)? I ask because if this is the case i can stop reading right now :(
PixelGMS chapter 13 . 3/28/2018
While the story is good it seems to lack the fluidity and grammaticality of a native speaker. I would recommend you either get a beta or go through each chapter once or twice to make sure everything sounds good.
ThoughtsOfDeath chapter 10 . 2/25/2018
Assuming 100 is the maximum, Hawkeye would be rated 80/90 easily
sharingankakashi007 chapter 13 . 2/1/2018
This is interesting hope ya write more
Following just in case
Guest chapter 2 . 1/21/2018
... I love the idea and concept...

But there are two big reasons I don't love this story.
- The MC wants to be better/cleverer than the Gamer, but wastes all 25 stat points?! He can increase his strenght, or all his stats, really, with training. The lower they are, the easier it is. But he ignores this fact and wastes them all, without even thinking which route to go or training them. I am nearly speechless and a small step from getting a stroke from such stupidy.
- You wrote Mana with 2 n ... 'manna'. Wtf? Eye cancer incoming.
scorpin17 chapter 13 . 10/8/2017
love it
HitGamer22 chapter 13 . 9/12/2017
I wish you would update but seeing as it has been a year I am basically dancing for rain, either way it was a great story.
MonarchOfGreed chapter 13 . 8/3/2017
awesome :) next~~
doubledamn chapter 3 . 6/4/2017
If he found a Devil Fruit, and attempted to form a spirit link with it, would he be able to speak to the being that gave Devil Fruit's to this world?
king gilgamesh chapter 7 . 5/28/2017
you were doing so well, now you have ruined it with the party skill urgh every Gamer SI is ruined by this. I mean its your ability, be jealous with it treat it like your baby especially in a place like One Piece. Fuck...so much potential ruined
MadelVer chapter 13 . 5/14/2017
THE STORY IS ABSOLOUTLY... AMAZING! The character and plot really dragged me on to keep reading! I was slightly dissapointed when there were only 13 chapters and has stopped at Nami's story. However! I do hope you continue writing these amazing chapters! I am quite excited to see Robin!
Guest chapter 5 . 1/27/2017
I'm really sorry about this. I love your story so much my only issue is, I couldn't help but notice in the beginning of this chapter you started writing about a 'gentle breeze'. You wrote genital instead so I figured I should tell you? Thank you so much for writing this.
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